This is my first Fanfic so I'll take all the criticism I can get. I want to be better at writing so if you have any comments at all on the flow of it or grammar or anything, I'd appreciate it.
I do not own Inuyasha or any of the characters
Chapter 1
Village
"Are you serious, Kagome?"
Wind from the speed of Inuyasha's running was flowing through their hair.
"Yeah. I sense three Shikon Jewel shards."
"Alright! Which direction?" Inuyasha was as impatient as ever to collect the Jewel shards.
"Dead ahead!" Kagome instructed.
Inuyasha's running was as swift and quick as it had always been. The forest's trees were speeding past the hanyou and the priestess. Then the blue sky came into sight as they came closer to the Jewel shards and out of the forest.
Inuyasha's mood suddenly changed.
"I smell blood, human and demon." Inuyasha warned Kagome. She prepared herself for what would soon come.
A small village came into view off in the distance. The crops had been destroyed, houses were crushed and burned and blood stained the ground from the dead villagers. Inuyasha's sensitive nose had come in handy many times, but this he wished he couldn't smell. The smell of mud, blood and smoke disgusted him. This demon will pay for what he's done... Inuyasha thought to himself.
Screams came from one of the last standing houses. Inuyasha continued running with Kagome on his back. They were still a distance from the scene so Inuyasha picked up the pace a bit. Inuyasha and Kagome heard the screams suddenly go quiet.
"Inuyasha, hurry up! They could still be alive!"
"Geez, you think I don't know that?!" Inuyasha snapped back. Kagome could feel his worry and she stopped talking. She could feel, see and almost hear his determination to save thee villagers. He's grown since we first met... she thought.
They arrived at the village. They took in their surroundings, seeing the villagers lying around them, the blood stained ground, the mud and the destroyed crops and the houses. Inuyasha's nose was overwhelmed by the stenches.
"I'm going to check the houses, see if anyone's still kicking." Inuyasha figure he was being a little insensitive after Kagome flashed him a that's-how-you're-going-to-talk-about-these-poor-souls? look.
Inuyasha ran off while Kagome looked around for anyone still alive outside. Her heart was being ripped from her chest as she saw mothers holding their children, cold and lifeless. The men attempting to shield their wives and children by covering the, but to no avail. She looked around and asked herslef if it was her fault, if she was responsible for this. After all, she was the one who shattered the Jewel that gave this demon such great power. She fell to her knees yelling, "I'm sorry! I'm so sorry!"
Well, there's the first chapter. I'm not one for too long of stories. Again, any criticism is appreciated! Just, please, be nice...
