So, this first version of the story really sucked. I've re-read it countless times and I've always wanted to re-write it since I've gotten somewhat better at writing over the past year.
I really loved the story, so I kept most of it. I changed some of the dialogue, added some details and in my opinion, made it much more interesting. Well, I hope you enjoy the new version and I also hope it does better than the original. Thanks to all of you whom have favorited/followed/reviewed in the past and thanks to those of you who do so in the future.
I appreciate all the support!
-Al
