Hii this is the first chapter of the my second fanfic and in this fic i will be practising some tips from reddit - mistress pleasant P.s please review.
chapter 1
*Genreal pov*
Valkyrie screamed Skullduggurys and Fletchers name, her voice getting caught by the wind before it reached its destination. The two men were too busy trying not to get killed to hear her pleas. Valkyrie, Fletcher and Skullduggury had been sent on a new case this morning, the three of them had stowaway on water sprite, the largest ship in Dublin, to investigate the Revengers' club. Skullduggury was fighting Spring -healed Jack and Fletcher was busy wih Scapegrace and Valkyrie got Sanguine, the toughest. She tried one final time to push the air at him with no luck, he put his arm around her waist and pressed the back of her head against his 's ragid breathing sent chills down her spine, her body trembled. Valkyrie wished Skullduggury would come and rescue her. Sanguine whipped out his straight razor and placed it on her throat, his hot breath dampened Valkyrie's ear, prickling her skin.
Sanguine reached into his trouser pocket and took out a metal object and placed into her pocket. Immediately she felt the little strength she had vanish and it was replaced by heaviness . Sanguine lifted her and took her to the edge of the ship,
"Any last words"he said with a smirk.
"Go to hell" Valkyrie snarled.
"Suit yourself and you know im enjoying this immensly"
Valkyrie said nothing. "Its was fun knowing you goodbye"Sanguine through her overboard and the last thing Valkyrie heard was Skullduggury and Fletcher shouting her name. She sank like a stone into the frezzing water, she tried swimming upward but something was pulling her down and then she remembered the metal object Sanguine put in her pocket. Her fingers were numb and turning blue but she plunged her hand in her pocket but couldn't pull the metal object out.It was stuck.Her lungs were soaring and Valkyrie's life started to ebb away and then there was total darkness, she was gone. Valkyries last thouhts were of Skullduggury , Fletcher,her parents and friends.
Fletcher fell to his knees and yelled Valkyries name, he sobed loudly with Skullduggury at his side his voice thick with sadness.
"Fletcher she's gone, she's not coming back" and then Skullduggurys voice cracked. The next morning the sanctuary found her body, it was all blue and lifeless Fletcher couldn't even glance at it. He still wouldn't believe that the love of his life was gone. He was lost and hopless without her, his usaully spikey hair was flat and looked damp. He was deppressed. who would look out for him now? who would care about him?. He had nobody else to count on to make his day ...
*The following morning, Funeral*
Valkyrie's body was placed into an ebony coffin with gold handles, and the name Valkyrie Cain in gold letters at the opening. All the men wore black suit and the women black tight dresses. Around the coffin flowers were placed, the biggest of all Fletchers who had visited every county he had been to and brought every single kind of flower available. They listned to the priest saying how she was a patriot to the country blah blah blah, and then 4 cleavers picked up the coffin gently and carried her outside and carefully placed it into the hole. Fletcher was shaking, sobbing for the love of his life Skullduggury placed a hand on his shoulder and told him it will be himself looked stressed. He had known her since she was 12, it wouldn't be in a hurry that he would forget Valkyrie Cain.
They all drove to Gordons house an mourned over her with the Echo Gordon. Fletcher, Tanith and Ghastly sobbed untill there was no more tears. They missed her,her voice,her sarcasm her everything. Fletcher was so stressed he stared into space for 2 hours muttering Valkyrie.
So do you like it, review please - mistresspleasant
