DISCLAIMER: I don't own Naruto...-- but i wish i did...but i don't.

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"hahahha"thinking

"talking" talking

hahha-what ever is bigger than a human (eg, kyuubi...etc)

Okay, just to cover things up...more than half the nin's of the mist have turned tail and joined Orochimaru, turning to be enemies of the leaf if they already weren't in the original anime

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"RASENGAN!"

"Suiton, Suijinheki!"

As a huge wall of water appereared out of the mouth of the nin of the mist, Naruto's rasengan just tore right through the barrierand hit the person square in the chest, twisting, turning, shredding and destroying the most of the nin's internal vital organs of the nin's top half.

With a loud grunt of pain, the man crashed spinning into the waterfall and creating a huge crater before the water started to flow over the crater. By this time the shinobi of the mist was mercifully knocked unconcious.

"Hah! Take that you overconfident idiot!" shouted Naruto in victory.

"tch, look who's talking, he's getting way too overconfident,"thought Jiraya.

"Naruto don't let your guard down!" shouted Jiraya.

By the time Jiraya finished saying that, a shout signaling a jutsu was heard.

"Suirou no Jutsu!"

As Jiraya had turned around to look, he saw that Naruto had been trapped in a ball of water.

"Naruto I'm comming, stay where you are!" shouted Jiraya.

"yeesh, like I was going to move on my own," thought Naruto, "I hope this works..."

"You aren't in any possition to go anywhere!" said a mist with a large build and a deep booming voice.

Just then, Naruto used his Rasengan and created a hurricane (whirlpool, typhoon, whatever you want to call it) inside the barrier of water. Being hard for the mist nin to hold on, the nin let go and was punched through several trees and knock out.

While the nins weren't looking(they are all looking at Naruto with wide eyes), Jiraya summoned a demolisher frog and squashed the rest of the mist nins ( I know that he prbably would have done something else,but i thought it would have been better if the shinobi of the mist were squished by a giant frog to death).

"Man, I thought I was a goner back there!" said Naruto loudly like the super loudmouth ninja he was.

"Shut up brat, you never would have been in that predicament in the first place if you weren't losing your head gloating," said Jiraya.

"But, you really should have seen your face at the time though, hahahahah, as if a lowly leaf nin would beat of superior strength such as the future hokage!" said an over excited Naruto.

Jiraya groaned in anoyance, then they both continued their journey back towards Konoha.

"What happened to that girl...whats her name?" asked Jiraya.

"Who, Karen? asked Naruto.

"Umm, she ran away screaming after you tried to ask her, her name," said Naruto, "you were drunk again ero-senin."

"Stop calling me that brat!" shouted Jiraya.

"And besides, you should be grateful to the gods that they gave you the chance for them to give you the chance of being one of the legendary senin's pupils!" said Jiraya.

"But you never teach me anything anymore ero-senin!" said Naruto overheatedly, "and don't kid yourself, you should be happy that you had the chance to be teching the future hokage old man!

"I'm not old! exclaimed Jiraya, "I am in fact only fifty."

"Tch, like I said 'old'," mumbled Naruto.

"I heard that brat!" said Jiraya, "and i was going to teach a perticular someone thats traveling with me, a new jut..."

He never had the chance to finish.

"I'm so sorry Jiraya-sama, please teach me your jutsu," said Naruto on his knees.

"Thats more like it brat," said Jiraya.

"Yeah, yeah so teach me the jutsu already," said Naruto.

"Keep your pants on," said Jiraya.

"The technique I am about to preform is a very difficult skill to master. The ranking should be from about a 'B' to an 'A' class jutsu, it is a powerful jutsu" said Jiraya.

"Okay I get it, show me already," said an over excited Naruto.

"Okay watch closely," said Jiraya.

Jiraya made a series of hand seals which was slightly too fast for Naruto, then shouted out "DOUTEN:YUUEN BAKUHA NO JUTSU!" and shaped his hands into a fist where two fingers (index and middle) was making a bridge shape (exactly like Sasuke did when fighting in the chuunin exams, he used the grand fireball technique and made his hand into a type of fist shape and launched the attack) and the tip of the two fingers touching the knuckle of his ring-finger and blew through it. To be surprised. That's what Naruto thought Jiraya would never do technique wise. Once again through out his life...he was proven wrong. Once again this technique had surprised the hell out of him. Then again, the word 'surprised' was such and understatement at the situation.

In one shot, uncountable acres of forrestry was distroyed in an instant. The view was more amazing than a fireworks festival. Millions of beams and strings of light, was shot out from the hand in shape of a fist while jiraya was blowing through, each one destroying an entire group of trees, obliterating it from viewing comprehension.

I suggest you start soon, Naruto," said Jiraya.

"Yoshi! I'm going to finish this technique in a week!" yelled Naruto as he put his fist up in the air.

"We'll see Naruto, I wonder if he can really be able to do it in a week..."