AN: I've decided to rewrite the original Vocaloid Castle. The original was written around the time I was just a beginner, so the original was... really bad. Like really bad. Especially since that the original Vocaloid Castle barely had a plot at all. So I've decided to rewrite this fanfic into something that actually have a decent plot. Hope you like this. Also, please tell me how this one is (and if I should keep the original or just delete it). By the way, this is set in the year 2013 in September (when Hope, my OC, was 15 years old), which is when the original was published, so certain things in my future fanfics won't be mentioned. Enjoy the story.
"Hope?" Apetrully said, knocking on the door as he waited in front of the front door of Hope's tree house.
"Sorry! Sorry! Sorry for making you wait." Hope quickly said, coming out of her tree house.
As Hope take out her key to lock her door, Apetrully said, "How have you been?"
"Alright." The pink and white monkey said, stuffing her key into a pink and purple backpack. "Although I might be planning on to get some sort of job."
"A job? I could give you the money." Apetrully said.
"No. No. You're letting me live at Big Green, where I live there on certain weeks. I think I'm old enough to make my own money." Hope said as the two got off the tree house's porch and walk their way to Big Green.
"You're 15 years old." Apetrully said with a bit of a deadpan tone in his voice.
"Exactly! I mean... I'm living on my own at age 15 on certain weeks, so I think I should get a small job for my own needs. Besides, I'm sure there are others my age who have a job."
The pink and white monkey licked her lips as she thought, But what job should I get? What job can I even get in the Hidden Kingdom?
"So, how are you, Apetrully? Something happening to Big Green?" Hope ask the commander. "Planning anything? New features to Big Green? New members?"
"Not really. Nothing really changed to the base. It's been pretty relaxing lately." Apetrully said.
"Huh..."
Hope stick her tongue out for a moment to think, I wonder if something exciting will happen to us. Not the bad exciting. More of a good exciting. It doesn't have to be mind blowing.
"Well, actually..." Apetrully said as Hope turn her head towards the commander. "There are a few rumors about a castle in the forest."
"A castle?" Hope said, raising an eyebrow in interest.
"Humans and animals have been seeing the old castle that used to belong the mice being remodeled, making everyone wonder who owns it now. Some believe it could now belong to some new species of animals, but I highly doubt it. I mean, the castle was abandoned for many years since the mice had left it for a better location where the cats doesn't know. The castle is being noticed by now since it looked rather... interesting."
I wonder where those mice are living now. Hope thought in wonder.
"Even though I'm not sure who's or what's going to rule over that castle, I've been thinking of visiting the castle with some gold to see if they would like to join Big Green." Apetrully continued.
"Can I come?" Hope ask with a big grin.
"I don't think that would be a good idea, Hope. It might be dangerous for you."
"Oh, come on!"
"I know you're upset about it, but it's for your own safety."
"Please."
"No."
"Please!"
"No."
"Pretty please with a cherry on top."
"...No."
Hope let out a disappointed sigh, and murmured, "How come you get to go on dangerous missions,and I don't?"
"Do you really think I do that for fun?" Apetrully ask, raising an eyebrow.
"No... but it would be a good experience for me to go on one." Hope said.
A deadpan look appears on the commander's face as he thought, Really?
"Hey!" Hope suddenly shouted, surprising the disguised monkey. "It's a good reason."
The commander soon shook his head slowly as he quietly murmurs, "Oh, Hope..."
