Story name: Their Mistake...

Summary: When she saw him fight, she was enchanted by his determination and ferocity. The orbs of cobalt held her in a spell, and all that was in those eye's was...

Rating: T for Teen

Reasons: Abuse, Alcohol, Swearing, Violence, blood, Angst.

A/N: Well... I did say that I was gonna do a prologue to the series now called "The Outcasts" This would be the start and the other one, is the sequel. This is the true beginning I might write one more... I might do a series... it depends... Actually I am thinking of doing a series and I don't really care if people read it or not... Enough Rambling...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

The Beginning of Sin...
Loss...

Purgatory, a city, and a prison. A city to those who cannot cross over completely and those who are never meant to cross, a city of violence and pain. Purgatory was known as a lawless zone, and only angel's and demons of great power or courage stepped here. Purgatory was infamous for it's 'Arena' a place where a friendly fight would ensue or a death match could watch. The Arena was the battle ground for angels and demons most to the death, some for observation, and other's just for fun. Above was the Angelic City of Heaven, and below the Cursed Pit's of Hell. When God/Kami came into being he created Angels to serve and protect him and the people. But one refused and he was cast into Earth which during it's time of a creation was a hell. Hatred fused within him for being thrown by his father he stole a part of hellish earth and created and became the absolute ruler of Hell. The birth of heaven, hell created a shift in the forming earth and it was cast into pieces. That was the birth of Purgatory known by angels as, 'Blood Earth' the earth that still bleeds.


Hell...

Not many people liked hell, they were afraid of what lurked, but then humans always feared what they could not see. In the great chasms and holes there were many creatures, men with horns and different colored skin, women who would seduce you then steal your soul, Imps who would cackle in the night promising your doom, Ogres who devour human flesh, and many other creatures. They were known as demons and they came in different shapes and sizes. Humans knew very little about demons, what they did know was common and slightly flawed knowledge. Common and correct knowledge, demons were ageless, demons came from hell, demons have a great variety. Common and flawed knowledge, all demons worked for the 'Fallen One'; most demons do but not all of them, all demons are evil; not exactly true there are some demons who are nice and work for Kami as spies, All demons had scaly wings; most demons had wings but not all of them were scaly some were descendants of fallen angels and had lustrous feathers, demons are devoid of love; Is that so? Then I shall change your mind with this. That's the common knowledge that people have and know. The story begins here with a demonic youth trying to prove he is the strongest in life by defeating his comrades and climbing the steps in the demonic army. That youth's name is Naruto... and the story begins...


Earthen time 3:52 A.M

The Torture Pit

He sat there looking into the pit that held screaming and writhing bodies of humans being digested by the monster beneath the pit. He gave a snort of discuss as he held up a hand, energy swirled around the air until it solidified into a single black ball that hovered an inch above his hand. "Hmph, it's your own fault..." he said he stood up he grabbed the ball and threw it. It exploded into a dark nexus of energy and their pain-filled shrieks shook the air. He looked down at them then he snorted in disgust and turned, he then fell to his knees as he felt pain between his shoulder blades, 'is it time? will I fly now?' he waited, however nothing happened. He looked up to see a smirking face, "What's the matter loser? Weak stomach?" He growled as he looked up at his most hated rival "Shut the fuck up! Sasuke, Leave me the fuck alone! Go hang out with your gay brother Sasugay," Sasuke's smirk faded slightly "And here I was trying to be friendly and give you a message about your Father, Naruto..." Naruto turned to look up at the raven haired, his blue slitted eye's narrowing, "What about my father?" Sasuke looked at him with those strange red eye's of his. "He's dead..."


Heaven

Humans despite being just as clueless about heaven as they are about hell, they draw comfort from here, for reasons only they know. Many of these reasons are slightly foolish but some make sense. The angels, are possibly one of the main reasons why they do this. Angels Typically were men or women with beautiful white wings similar to dove's, however not all angel's wings were white or feathered. Micheal the Archangel is known for being an angel with black wings. However he is not the only one there are several, some white, some blue, some the color of honey, other sometimes skeletal. Also some had only one wing, most had two, and sometimes four but usually they were powerful high-ranking angels, and there's only been two, six winged angels called Seraphyes. Ah yes, in the angelic world there are different types of angels, messengers, who were extremely fast and therefore carried no armor. Seraphs, were four winged angels with great power and fighting skill, Guardians, were angels that protected the weak and the gates of Heaven, known for their heavy armor and powerful skills. Magolias , the most powerful angels in existence capable of exorcising even highest level of demons. Then there were the normal angels who had a large variety of jobs and skills. And that is the kingdom of heaven.


Earthen time: 3:00 A.M

Earth

Neji, one of the five Seraphim was currently battling a demon of great power. He looked at the demon's large spiked blond hair, his four blood-red wings, and his blue slitted pupils. "HA! I thought you Seraphim were stronger than that! Is this really the extent of your power?" the demon taunted, his blue eye's flashing dangerously. Neji gritted his teeth and opened his large wings and beat back-wards to retreat, and come up with a strategy. The demon just watched, smirking then he chuckled and sat down, why should he be worried?

Neji was panting as he rested against a tree, his skills were proving useless, and his powers even more so. No matter what he did the demon either dodged or blocked his attacks. There was one technique but most angels didn't use it because there wasn't a demon powerful to force them to use it however it seemed he would need to. He sighed, he looked at the spear in his hand, he looked around when he heard a rustling. "!" Neji leapt forward as a enormous blade cleaved the tree he was hiding neatly in two. "As much, as I would like to see your stupid plan, I'm a bit impatient and your becoming a real thorn in my back!" the demon said. He raised his large sword with one hand and brought it down on the unfortunate angel. Neji closed his eye's ready to accept his fate.

"Y-Y-YOU! HIASHI YOU BAS- GAH!" Neji opened his eye's to see a thin double bladed sword sticking out of the demon's chest. Neji knew that sword, it was his uncle's Hiashi's! But what was he doing here? He saw Hiashi looking down at him with a sad smile, "Neji, you must leave at once!" Hiashi said. "HIASHI! DAMN IT! GET YOUR DAMN TOAD STICKER OUT OF ME NOW! SO I CAN KILL YOU!" The demon roared gnashing his razor sharp teeth. Hiashi looked at the demon sadly, "As much as you and many other's want to kill my cousin I cannot allow it to pass... Neji you must leave at ONCE!" Neji refused, "I will not let you fight this monster alone! And what of-!" Hiashi flashed his pale eye's at Neji. "NEJI! You will leave immediately if we both die here who will protect and teach her? Answer me!" Neji knew he was losing the fight, he hung his head dejectedly, "No one will..." he said. Hiashi nodded "Now GO! That's an order!" Neji looked at his Uncle then giving a frustrated growl he crouched then leapt into the air beating his wings to return to Heaven.

Hiashi watched him go but his watching was cut short as he felt a large piece of demonic metal sink deep into his chest. Hiashi groaned but stood tall, "If I go down! THEN YOU GO DOWN AS WELL!" The demon roared, Hiashi smiled sadly. "A shame that we fought as equals in the Arena and now... we fight as enemies..." The demon chuckled coughing as he did, "Heh-heh-heh... Ugh! Yeah... I have to admit it was rather fun fighting you..." Hiashi smiled, "I concur, it was enjoyable... you were probably the most vicious fighter I ever fought in the Arena..." The demon felt a smile creeping onto his lips, "And you were the sneakiest bastard I ever fought!" Hiashi grimaced at the praise. They paused frozen like a statue then, "So this is how were gonna die? Pretty pathetic if you ask me..." Hiashi sighed, "It pains me to say that I agree, I would've at least expected a crowd watching..." The demon smirked, "Well... I guess I'll see you around Hiashi, wherever that is!" Hiashi smiled, "And you as well..." He glowed white, then there was a large explosion.


Earthen Time 4:00

The First Circle

Naruto was still stunned his father, one of the greatest demons of his time, was dead, DEAD! It wasn't possible but then Naruto thought 'No, it's as the humans say, anything is possible...' Naruto grimaced. He would get revenge, he would tear the one who killed his father into ribbons! Neji, that was the name right? He heard of this 'Neji' he was known in heaven as the 'Spear of Light' for he was a master spear user and a brilliant tactician. "Spear huh?" Naruto looked at his hand, normally a demon wouldn't of been able to create a weapon of darkness until they were 600 but Naruto, had created his at 400, and unlike most demons whose normally stayed in one physical shape after formed, Naruto's could switch it's shape after formation. This would've been a great success and given him some name... if Sasuke hadn't done the same thing before him. "Fuckin' bastard..." Was all that Naruto said.

Naruto looked up, from the fiery depths of the first circle, "Fuck it! I'm going to the Arena!" He said, and he ran toward the steps that led to Purgatory. He needed to get some frustration out his body, the Arena was the perfect place.


Earthen Time 4:00

The Silver Palace

She could not believe her ears as her cousin Neji told her that her father was dead. "I'm sorry... Hinata-sama..." She didn't want to believe she didn't want to look at him. Hinata just lowered her head cupping her face with her hands and sobbed silently into her hands. She had to go somewhere, away from her cousin, away from this place. She stood up her white robe fluttering the air her cheeks red and her eye's shut and ran past Neji. "Hinata-sama!" She didn't stop as he continued to run, "Hinata-sama!" Neji ran after her but she had disappeared.

Neji giving a frustrated sigh leapt into the air landing on a tower nearby. He looked around, scanning the ground Hinata was nowhere to be found, she hadn't left the Gates of David so where could she of gone? He looked toward some gray steps that were tinted red due to blood, and saw! "No!" He instantly leapt off the tower. He landed on the gray steps and got on his knee, he picked up the white cloth which was becoming a dusty red. He sniffed, and confirmed his worst fear... She had stepped into Purgatory...


MEOW! REPLY! Give me your opinions on it they are widely welcomed! since I am the author who doesn't give a rats bum! Well how did you like it? Anyway it's gonna get better in the next chapter! Fluffiness galore! Please READ! and REVIEW!

NEXT CHAPTER! Sight...

Oh yes... how did you like the Fourth Hokage being a demon? MWAH HA HA HA HA!

Edit: Made some Spelling checks and what not...