Space Marine Hymn

I was playing Dawn of War 2 last night and I thought, hey the space marines are similar to the United States Marine Corp. So I decided to convert the Marine Corp Hymn so that it would fit the Space Marines.

Semper fi! Always Loyal

Disclaimer: I own nothing but the computer I wrote this on.

From the halls of Typhon Prima,

To the shores of Calderis,

We fight our Emperor's battles

In the air, on land, and sea;

First to fight for right and freedom

And to keep our honor clean;

We are proud to claim the title

Of Imperial Space Marine.

Our flag's unfurled to every breeze

From dawn to setting sun;

We have fought in every clime and place

Where we could take a gun;

In the snow of far-off Lorn V

And in sunny tropic scenes;

You will find us always at the front

The Imperial Space Marine.

Here's faith to you and to our brothers

Which we are proud to serve;

In many a strife we've fought for life

And never lost our nerve;

If the Guard and the Navy

Ever look on the Emperor's scenes;

They will find the streets are guarded

By Imperial Space Marines.

Tell me what you think.