Idea just popped into my head, and I had to write it. Just a short drabble.


Ashfur was lying beside Spiderleg, one of his only friends. Glancing around the camp, he saw Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight sharing tongues. They

were gazing hungrily at each other, as if this was the last time they would see each other.

"You know what, Spiderleg? Sometimes I wish I was invisible, so I could be with Squirrelflight all the time, and she could never tell me to

go away.

Gazing sadly at the two cats, he felt the familiar emotion of pain fill up inside of him.

Spiderleg glanced sideways at Ashfur, and spoke

"Well…you already have your wish."

Turning to face Spiderleg, Ashfur turned his head to one side, puzzled.

"What do you mean, Spiderleg?"

Ashfur meowed, still confused.

Stifling a yawn, Spiderleg began to groom himself. Without looking at Ashfur, he said

"I don't think Squirrelflight even knows you exist."


That's my last Ashfur thing for a while. Idea just came to me, and I had to write it. I just feel so bad for Ashfur, and Angry that he got killed. Erin Hunter made a mistake there.