The Castle of secrets: chapter 1
In this au it's basically got the cast of VLD but in a fantasy world and it's less giant robot cats and more prepare to be smothered into the most ridiculous situations I can come up with I guess? Anyway enjoy the absolutely innocent fumbled words of my brain written down in a seemingly understandable format. Prepare for a bumpy ride.
Lance had not expected his day to end in a supposedly abandoned castle on the edge of the Kingdoms territory. Neither had he excepted to see his best friend and his other slightly smaller less great at cooking best friend in paintings on the walls of the castle. "What is this place? Its not dusty, but it's not lived in" He was standing in the front hall. In front of a pair of large doors, as big as what lance imagined the giants of the south land to look like. Just as lance was about to touch one of the paintings, the large doors flew open. To reveal a creature like no other.
You see the most unexpected thing to end Lance's day was not the castle, not the odd paintings, but a giant demon monster with a large orange moustache chasing him through the dark and seemingly endless labyrinth of the halls of that very castle. And as Lance ran, there was another odd thing that he didn't notice at first. The seemingly terrifying moustache wearing demon had the humour of a really good comedian. So while running for his life, lancing was laughing his head off as the giant demon behind him shouted joke after joke.
Eventually lance slipped up, while laughing too hard than should be possible, he tripped on a rug. As he slid on his front the demon behind him shrunk in size to maybe the size of a centaur. A very large centaur. Then in that really odd accent of the demon it decided to introduce it itself, stretching out a claw hand out to Lance to help him up. "Are you okay little man? I knew my old joking tactic would work! Why it worked on Commander Kanto the blue dragons rider 10'000 years ago!"
"Commander Kanto? Blue dragon? RIDER!?"
On the other side of the castle sat another demon. Though slightly larger and with sort of crown like horns. Her long mane of pale blue hair stood out against her pitch black scales. He mouth curled into a frown, making her long black fangs visible. "Send a message to Keith Kogane to come to the castle immediately. I believe we have found our next rider"
"Yes princess, Keith will be notified shortly" The two centaurs resembling Lance's best friends responded.
As they walked down the hall to the notification hall, they talked. "Isn't it nice to know Lance will be joining us soon? I can't wait to find out what creature he really is, I still can't believe Zarkon's been oppressing the town of Earths inhabitants with that weird fungus. It's so selfish that he oppressed millions of people just because he wanted to have his Empire have the largest population of magical creatures! What do you think Pidge?" The larger one ranted.
"You know I'm actually more interested in what Keith will be, he's supposedly part Galra, but if the other part can't be human than what creature would he really be? I like to think his fiery personality might make him a fire demon. Or maybe goose. Just a really large goose. You know what Hunk we are betting on this, I'll bet goose you bet?" The centaur now known as Pidge questioned.
"I like to think Keith might be part of Allura and Coran's race. Anyway how much are we betting? I'm thinking 100 Gac and a jar of pickles"
"Two jars of pickles"
"Fine, 100 Gac and two jars of pickles"
I hope you enjoyed the first chapter! If I missed any punctuation errors or grammatical errors please leave a review and tell me. I'm really looking for some opinions critique as I'm trying to improve writing already established characters. I feel like my writing style was all over the shot in this but I dunno. Hope you enjoyed it regardless. No idea when the next Chapter will be writtedn.
