Hello everyone this is a poem challenge I am doing with Zaraki Jaegerjaquez for fun. I hope you all enjoy the first one the theme/challenge was Gin's thoughts as he is dying. Be sure to check out Zaraki's corresponding poem on his profile.

Title: Twist and Innocence

Blood and pain swirl

A mix both heady and infuriating

For betrayal is it even so?

An actor loses himself in the role

And the goal seems far

An endless night

Of pale sand and corpses

Her eyes stare at you

Accusing and sorrowful

You wonder when innocence was stolen

Did you take it?

No your mind is become hazy

She looks like an angel

Far above him

Where he lay in the coiled pits of hell

You wished for salvation

Hoped that this end

Wasn't the end

But time is spilling forth

Like the crimson from your wound

The pain beats against your head

Dimming slowing

You think it might be your heart

One less evil soul in the world

She mourns and cries

Tears that shouldn't be shed

Not for a soul such as him

To wipe them away should be easy

But darkness is closing in fast

Orange flutters into view and you know

Your time is up

Looking into crystal blue

Like the deep sky

Childhood times

Life struggles from unwilling lungs

And the drumming slows to a still

She is there above you

In the end of it all

You wish that this hadn't come to pass

You promised

But who trusts a snake's words

Sorry

The thought is your last as you plummet into darkness

Rangiku

I hope you all liked and the next poem will go up whenever another challenge commences. Till then (: