I've never wrote a pokemon story before but I have watched every season and I've always wanted to write one so I thought I'd give it a try. So please review and tell me how to improve

'Got to keep moving. Can't stop, mustn't stop.'

Flashback

"You are worthless. Why I ever had you I'll never know." A hand flew down striking my face, knocking me to the floor my legs buckling under me.

I tried to apologise for my failure but he either didn't hear what I had to say or he simply didn't bother to listen.

"What is wrong with you? You are an embarrassment you are making the others look as pathetic as you are" the harsh voice cut at me; making me feel even smaller than I already was. I didn't feel it was my fault I was so weak I was still a new born. I only hatched a month ago.

'I'm sorry I'll do better next time' I tried to plead with him, hoping he would stop before my punishment grew.

"You need to be taught what happens to weak things like you" a booted foot came at me. I screwed my eyes closed bracing myself for what was to come.

The pain shot through me, recurring every few seconds. Unconsciousness started to creep in the corners of my mind as my cries of pain quietened as the time lengthened.

End flashback

Shaking my head to remove the painful memories I skidded to a stop before I crashed into a tree. I didn't know how long I had been running for but I did know that I couldn't stop.

It was early morning the sun was just peaking over the horizon. Pidgey and spearow were waking, their tunes being caught by the early morning breeze. The serenity of it all almost made my life before seem like a bad dream.

I couldn't get complacent though. If I fooled myself into thinking just that then I would return to him before he awoken and my life would be hell again.

Allowing myself a few moments more to absorb the beautiful song the birds were emitting, I closed my eyes focusing on the flow of the tune humming it softly as I started running again. The bruised and raw pads on my feet causing me pain with every branch I stepped on; but I ignored them to the best of my ability.

When I finally stopped again the sun was high in the sky, from what my friends taught me it meant it was about ten in the morning. A pang of guilt cut into my heart as I thought of them.

'I left them behind? How could I do that? They were my friends they helped me though the hardest times with him, they helped heal my wounds. How could I just abandon them? I'm a horrible friend' I banished the guilt I felt. Creating a plan to help them and me, it wasn't very good but I was fairly sure it made sense.

I would find a bigger stronger pokemon and have it get them away from him and safe.

I padded through a grassy patch I had reached after my slow walking as I thought; I indulged myself in the grass, allowing the thin blades to seep through my toes as I wriggled them. I let out a contented purr like sound before continuing on my walk.

I didn't feel like I had to run any more. I had weaved through the trees as I ran so I wouldn't be easy to track, but I doubted that he would even bother looking for me, as he had said many times in the past he didn't know why he even caught me.

While my attention was elsewhere I collided with an unmoveable object, dropping back and looking up at the object as I tried to push myself up from a dog's sitting position. Standing above me was a huge turtle type pokemon, perfect for what I wanted one like it for but awful as it looked enraged, two huge blaster looking things were sticking from its brown shell as its blue head was glaring down at me.

"What did you do you little runt?" it spat at me as it stomped closer as I tried to scurry away.

"Sorry Sir I didn't mean to. Honest I didn't" I tried to apologize but it seemed the more I talked the angrier it got.

"You an idiot lass? Watch where you're going, thanks to you I dropped my food and a big lad like me needs his food. Small thing like you would be a nice snack before I have to go hunting again" The turtle pokemon towered over me as I tried, and failed, to sink into the ground.

Knowing that nothing I could say would stop him from trying to attack me, I turned running desperately away from him, trying no ignore the throb in my legs with each step as I placed too much weight on them after the ordeal the night before.

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