Hello. Before I start the story I would like to say that this is my first fanfiction story so I would love some
Good feedback ,Including constructive criticism, Because they help with my work. This story is short.
Hope you Enjoy
Ages:
Ash 13
May 13
Delia 36
Brock 18
Max 9
It was a cold christmas Eve in the kanto Region, but it was not silent because a young Ash ketchum Was rushing
Around town looking for a present for his best friend May "Pikachu how long does it take to find a present for May"
Ash asked his long-time friend. "pi pikachu chu pika chu chu" (It depends how dumb you are) Pikachu Said before
running off "HEY" Ash shouted but pikachu was to far to hear.
I got the presents for Brock and Max and that was easy. Ash thought to himself. "Thats it, Girls love jewelry.
Hurry Ash Hurry" Ash shouted outloud. Sadly, When Ash got to the jewelry shop, it was already closed.
I've got it. Ash thought.
The next Day
Christmas
I hope May likes her present Ash wondered.
"Come on everyone". its time to open presents Said Delia ,Ash's Mum.
(A.N i will skip the presents being opened and go to Mays Present)
"There is still one more present for May" Said Brock
May Opened the present to find a note inside
"I love You" She Read the note aloud "From Ash Ketchum"
"EW YOU LOVE MY SISTER" Max said disgusted at Ash
May started walking over to Ash and gave him a small Kiss
10 years Later.
"Do You Ash take May to be your Wife"
"I do" Said Ash
"Do you May take Ash to be your husband"
"I do" Said May
"You may now Kiss The Bride"
The End
Thank you for reading hope you enjoyed This is my first story so R&R
