Kudos to Epiphany.
(2008-06-07 -- ch 8 -- anon)
I have decided to do what she talked about:)
Her review
I really liked this; I'm a girl, and you got what we actually do want. Congratulations.
Sam was slightly OOC, but so slightly that you could have missed it. I think that in that situation, poetic liscense can apply. It's also pretty difficult to imagine Danny being so bold, like when he kissed her in the school hallway. I think it would have been more realisic to have him chicken out on a few in the beginning.
All in all, though, I'd like to see AftC, Sam Edition. I need it. ;D
-Epiphany-
Summary
When Monday rolled around, Sam noted this. Something happened... Something that she had no idea about. Tucker and Danny were now inseparable (not that they weren't, before). They whispered and met up where they knew she wasn't going to be. Something was happening.
And then, to top it off, Danny was acting strange. Sam could tell right away. He was never this brave; He never acted this way before. He was different... But maybe this was really him. Maybe, Danny never was "himself" because he was afraid to show his feelings. Sam wondered about this day and night, but could never find an answer.
But, still... Danny was different.
More boldness, more romance, more laughter.
Less stress, less agitation, less seriousness.
Danny was different.
And Sam liked it.
