the complete rewrite of The unknown
Chapter 1: The Unspoken
SSA Mandie Taylor and Unit Chief SSA Aaron Hotchner were kidnapped by two unsubs. They have kidnapped highschool girls, and used them then killed them. Now it was different. Taking two Federal Agents was a major no no. Mandie was out cold, on the floor of a old smelly room. On the contrary, her boss, Aaron Hotchner..or Hotch was coming too. Looking around carefully, he saw nothing but shagged carpet and bad wallpaper. 1970s all over again.. he thought carefully. He tried to stand but to notice he was chained to a bed. Mandie was just laying hopelessly in the corner. He could reach her..just barely. Her blonde hair was in her face, matted down. She was unconscious, yes, but still alive. He was pulling as hard as he could to get near her. Almost breaking a bone or two. But he managed to touch her softly. "Mandie?" he asked softly. "Mandie? Mandie!" he was whispering because he didn't want anyone to hear them. Mandie groggily woke up and looked up at him. "What are you doing in my room...?" she asked. Drugs..they drugged her..why not me? Im obviously the bigger, stronger threat. She's just..not as strong as me..he thought in his mind. "We are not in a bedroom. Mandie, we are held hostage..do you remember anything?" he asked. Mandie sat up some. She blinked slowly, trying to remember. Her first case and she was already held hostage. "You probably think Im a dumb ass for getting kidnapped." she murmured. "Its not your fault. They caught us completely off guard." he reminded her. Mandie held her head and she cringed. "I know that! God.." she snapped at him. He was taken back at this. Stretching out his hand towards her she didn't reach out. She just sat there in a curled ball. She felt disgusted, but this was part of the job discription. Gettin' muddy and kickin back a few. And that sometimes until your dead asleep. Well, she was temporarily dead. Just like a mini coma..sort of. She tried to stand but she just slid down the wall. "What the hell happened.." she murmured. Hotch was trying to get her to remember what happened. Then he suddenly remembered the profile they gave out..
"The unsubs..or unknown subjects, are both male. One is dominant and more of a threat. While his partner, the submissive one, looks up to his partner. They may be brothers, but then again, it could just be friends who prey on women. They were most likely abused by their mother, or mothers during their childhood. They hate women, and get off on hurting them. Most likely raping them to get in control of the situation. They make the women vulnerable to the situation that they are in. Often drugging them with GHB or Rohypnol. They take them off the streets, or seduce them from other places. These attacks are likely in the nighttime. When everyone is at parties, or sleeping. They attack when no one is looking, or in a highly populated place, they 'blend-in' with the crowd and seduce a young woman. These men are averaging in about 5'10-6'. They are not heavy builders, nor are they obese. They are slim, slendor, or with slight muscles. The dominant male has scars, and lots of them. But he often hides them under his clothing. The submissive one has no scars, but imprints of ones on his brain. They seen everything, and they will kill if nessecery. If you come in contact with one of these men, they will try to lure you if you are beautiful enough. These women they are targeting, they are in their 20s to late 40s. Hair is mainly blondeish brown. Eye colour is either brown, green, or blue. They appear to be fit, and they dont care if they have kids. They film the rape, and send it to the husbands or family members. In this case, Eva Brown, age 30, blonde hair, green eyes. She was kidnapped on her way home from work. She lives in a middle class area. Her car was in the shop, so in the morning she took a cab. They decided to walk home, she was very alert, but in the poorly lit area, that makes her an easy target. She was found dead, four weeks later."
Aaron looked back at Mandie. She was tired, she couldn't move as well..his eyes widened, but then recovered five seconds later. "Mandie...?" he asked. Mandie turned her head carefully over towards him. "Sir?" she asked. "Do you hurt?" he asked. Mandie's eyebrows shot up and then one went down. "Yeah, of course..do you?" she asked. He moved some, he hurt, just a little though. "I mean, do you hurt, like someone raped you...?" he asked. Mandie blinked. "The profile..oh...I...Im not sure." she said. Hotch sighed, if it DID happen to her. The unsubs are gonna be well dead. Mandie tried to stand again, but pain ripped through her. She fell to the ground, hard. She tried to sit up but she just laid there. "Everywhere hurts.." she murmured. Hotch tried to pull over towards her, seeing his newest member, on the floor, not moving. It hurt him, and it hurt him bad. Just as he tried to pull over towards her the door swung open to find a man, with flames up his arms and brown hair staring at them. "Dont move towards her, man." he said. He was obviously the dominant of the two. He walked over towards Mandie and picked her up roughly. She yelled at him, Hotch was yelling at him to take him instead of her. The softer man, obviously the submissive one, walked over to Hotch. Holding him still, or at least tried to. Putting duct tape on Hotch and knocking him out. Mandie was screaming for help, but she was loosing it. The dominant one slapped Mandie and she was wiggling softly this time. He threw her onto the ground and then dragged her out of the room by her hair. The submissive one stayed behind sitting on the floor in a meditation style.
After some what of time, Aaron finally awoken. The submissive one came over and ripped off the tape. Hotch made a face as the tape was ripped off the tape. "What do you want? Where's the girl?" he didn't give our her name. He got up and bit his lip. Then he headed for the door opening it. Screams in the distance could be heard, he didn't have the restraints anymore so he walked over to the door but it was shut immedately. Aaron tried to open the door but it was locked tightly. He pressed his head against the door, he was pretty thin, but not as thin. The sound of water and silence was in the hallway. Probably coming from the other room. He pulled back and sat on the bed. Pulling his hands up and onto his face he let out a groan. He hoped to God..or something with higher power, that the team would find them, safely. He heard the door being unlocked and it opened to reveal Mandie being pushed in and the door shut. He got up and quickly came over to her. Trying to catch her if she fell, she just shook her head. He then noticed how pale and how wet she was. "Did..did they do this to you?" he asked her. She nodded and he tried to comfort her but she pushed his hands away and went to the bed. Sitting on it carefully she laid down on it. She felt uncomfortable and weak. He just stood there, looking at her. They needed to get out of here, and fast.
