~*~Another's View~*~
this story starts in the Hufflepuff common room before the Yule Ball cause i really sux at trying to describe setting and stuff.
((disclaimer, i dont own the characters, or anything at that matter. i dont even own this computer, its my parents.))
chapter 1:
Susan rolled her hair up into a bun, examined it from all angles in the mirror and let it fall back down again. Taking two chunks of hair from the back she twisted them together and exmanined that style.
"ARGE", she cried out in frustration. "I can't think of anything to do with my bloody hair"
"Just put it in a braid down the back and be done with it", Hannah suggested from her seat as she was apply a fine layer of make-up. The girl's bathroom was crowded so they made some mirrors so they could get ready in the common room.
"*you* know who invited me, i dont want to look like i always do. i want to look elegant" Susan told Hannah, dropping her hair down again.
"Who invited you?", Cedric asked, passing the fourth years on his way up to his dorm. He stopped to wait for an answer, his eyes smiling at the two kindly.
"Draco", Susan told him dreamily. (a/n dun worry, I know what I'm doing, I know he goes to the Ball with Pansy. So just watch)
"draco MALFOY?", Cedric asked, almost chocking.
"Yes", Susan confirmed, glairing at Cedric.
"But he's in Slytherin", Cedric said lamely.
"So? Honestly Cedric, you're being almost as bad to Slytherin Students as the rest of the school are to us Hufflepuffs. They're not all bad. And you wonder how Bigotry starts", Susan told him off. Cedric moved him mouth to reply but closed it in defeat.
"Yeah Ced. Besides, you're going to go with Cho. She's in Ravenclaw. Are you saying Ravenclaw are more respectable than Slytherin?", Hannah asked deffensivly.
"No.. it's just... never mind", Cedric sighed. "hope you have fun" he added before continueing to his dorm as he intended. Hannah got up and went behind Susan. She then proceded to curl the girl's hair around her wand giving her rounded locks alot of bounce. Examining the new look in a mirror Susan let out a squeal.
"Its perfect", she said giving Hannah a hug. Hannah wasn't done yet, she pulled back the curls into a half pony tail and tied them with a wide lavender ribbon that matched her dress perfectly. When they were done with her doo, they turned to Hannah. Susan braided a small portion of Hannah's own hair in the front and tied them around to the back, stringing them together with some thin sky blue ribbions. When both thier hairs were done, they added some finishing touches and were ready for the dance that was to start in half an hour.
"You never told me who you were going with", Susan commented.
"Oh didn't I?", Hannah replied, blushing.
"Come on, i'm going to find out sooner or later", Susan told her friend slyly.
"Justin", Hannah said bearly audiable.
"Wow, he's really nice", Susan congradulated her.
A/N:
okay, i actually have this story planned out and its rather short but it had an end (might make a part 2 or something if i can think of stuff) okay, um... 5 reviews, 5 reviews and i'll post the next part.
A/N II: return of the Writter:
Thanks Billy Gilman's Girl for the Constructive Critism. XX i can't wait till my computer gets spell check.
this story starts in the Hufflepuff common room before the Yule Ball cause i really sux at trying to describe setting and stuff.
((disclaimer, i dont own the characters, or anything at that matter. i dont even own this computer, its my parents.))
chapter 1:
Susan rolled her hair up into a bun, examined it from all angles in the mirror and let it fall back down again. Taking two chunks of hair from the back she twisted them together and exmanined that style.
"ARGE", she cried out in frustration. "I can't think of anything to do with my bloody hair"
"Just put it in a braid down the back and be done with it", Hannah suggested from her seat as she was apply a fine layer of make-up. The girl's bathroom was crowded so they made some mirrors so they could get ready in the common room.
"*you* know who invited me, i dont want to look like i always do. i want to look elegant" Susan told Hannah, dropping her hair down again.
"Who invited you?", Cedric asked, passing the fourth years on his way up to his dorm. He stopped to wait for an answer, his eyes smiling at the two kindly.
"Draco", Susan told him dreamily. (a/n dun worry, I know what I'm doing, I know he goes to the Ball with Pansy. So just watch)
"draco MALFOY?", Cedric asked, almost chocking.
"Yes", Susan confirmed, glairing at Cedric.
"But he's in Slytherin", Cedric said lamely.
"So? Honestly Cedric, you're being almost as bad to Slytherin Students as the rest of the school are to us Hufflepuffs. They're not all bad. And you wonder how Bigotry starts", Susan told him off. Cedric moved him mouth to reply but closed it in defeat.
"Yeah Ced. Besides, you're going to go with Cho. She's in Ravenclaw. Are you saying Ravenclaw are more respectable than Slytherin?", Hannah asked deffensivly.
"No.. it's just... never mind", Cedric sighed. "hope you have fun" he added before continueing to his dorm as he intended. Hannah got up and went behind Susan. She then proceded to curl the girl's hair around her wand giving her rounded locks alot of bounce. Examining the new look in a mirror Susan let out a squeal.
"Its perfect", she said giving Hannah a hug. Hannah wasn't done yet, she pulled back the curls into a half pony tail and tied them with a wide lavender ribbon that matched her dress perfectly. When they were done with her doo, they turned to Hannah. Susan braided a small portion of Hannah's own hair in the front and tied them around to the back, stringing them together with some thin sky blue ribbions. When both thier hairs were done, they added some finishing touches and were ready for the dance that was to start in half an hour.
"You never told me who you were going with", Susan commented.
"Oh didn't I?", Hannah replied, blushing.
"Come on, i'm going to find out sooner or later", Susan told her friend slyly.
"Justin", Hannah said bearly audiable.
"Wow, he's really nice", Susan congradulated her.
A/N:
okay, i actually have this story planned out and its rather short but it had an end (might make a part 2 or something if i can think of stuff) okay, um... 5 reviews, 5 reviews and i'll post the next part.
A/N II: return of the Writter:
Thanks Billy Gilman's Girl for the Constructive Critism. XX i can't wait till my computer gets spell check.
