When The Wind Blows- REVISED

This is my revised edition to the one I had done previously.

CHAPTER 1- Week Full Of Fun Dead Ahead

Pan blow-dried her silky, raven hair. She put on a purple tank top and a white pair of jeans. She looked for her mascara and put it on, then her eyeliner. She put her hair up in a bun.

"Pan, are you ready yet?" asked her mother impatiently.

"I'm almost ready, hold on a sec!" she yelled back.

Pan was going to Bra's house. She hadn't seen the Briefs family for 6 years now. She was 16 years old, and since they had moved, she had learnt a lot about fashion, although she still trained. After all, she had been a tomboy pure from the beginning.

Pan walked down to her room and grabbed a backpack full of things she would need. She was staying for about a week, because her father Gohan, and her mother Videl were going on a long business trip. Pan hoped they would take longer, since she wanted to see her best friend. Of course she grabbed her credit card.

" Knowing Bra, she will ask me to go shopping with her." she sighed. " This is going to be a long week!"

A FEW HOURS LATER

"Pan, now you be good, and listen to whatever Bulma tells you to, and by the way, don't get on Vegeta's nerves." Videl said giving her daughter a peck on the cheek. "Pan, don't forget to study-"Gohan was cut off because Bra came rushing out to greet them.

"HEY GIRL!" Bra yelled at Pan." You've changed so much! Oh, and by the way, that outfit looks very adorable on you!" "Yeah, well can I go to my room now? I have a slightly light load on me, and I want to go shopping."(A/N Pan wants to go shopping? Never heard of that before!) "You actually do? That's great!" Bra said taking Pan's stuff and showing her to her room.

When Pan looked out of her window, she saw that her parents had already left. Pan looked around the room, noting most of the needy items she needed were already taken care of, thanks to the cleaning bots that Bulma had invented. Pan wandered into the hallway, not sure of whom was following her.

When she sensed Ki, she turned around and bumped into Trunks. He looked at her, glancing her up and down. He hadn't seen her in 6 years of course, and he didn't expect the annoying brat to look so damn cute. What was he thinking? He was like, 14 years older than her, and besides, nobody would approve of them anyways. Why was he thinking these, wet thoughts all of a sudden? He stared into her deep, dark chocolate brown eyes.

"She does look hot though." He said to himself.

Pan looked at trunks, and then excused herself. She quickly went to her room and sat on her bed.

"Is it me, or is Trunks hot?" she thought." But wait, he is just too old for me in the first place. I can't be with him. Bra came into the room.

"Ready to go?" she asked." I have to buy myself a new outfit. I'm getting to bored of the same old outfit everyday."

"Don't you have a whole closet full, and then some?" Pan asked.

"Yeah, but you know how I am with clothes." Bra said." Anyways, let's go shop!"

Pan and Bra left a note saying they would be at HighBridge Mall, and they would be back around 10:00.

Trunks came into the room and saw the note. He quickly read it, and then grabbed some money. He then phoned up Goten.

Ring...Ring...Ring... Goten answered the phone.

"Hello, this is the Son residence, this is Goten speaking"

"Hey Trunks, what's happening?" Goten asked.

"Not too much, but I need your help. You see, well..."

"Yeah?"

"For some strange reason, I like...well all of a sudden love... Pan."

"You like my niece? Well, how has she been? We've lost touch with her family for 6 years now, since they moved, and everybody wants to see her."

"She's fine, but maybe you should bring your family over here to meet her if you want to"

"Hell yeah! We'll be over in a few." Click Trunks looked at a picture of Pan when she was 10.

Gosh she looked so different. But she still had that same old tomboyish smile.

Trunks was deep in thought when the Son family arrived.

"HEY!" said Goten, yelling in Trunks' ear and shoved him out of deep thoughts. "Hi"

Goku looked around.

"I don't see Panny here anywhere" he said.

Just then Pan came down and saw her grandfather. She lowered her power down and snuck up behind him. She then grabbed Goku behind the back and pulled him down with a lot of strength.

Everybody laughed. Chi-Chi looked at her granddaughter with pride. "She gets that from me!" she thought." I wonder if she inherited anything else"

"OWIEE! That hurt!" Goku said rubbing his back.

"Looks like you got some training to do Grandpa!" She said, with the Son grin.

Pan looked at her grandfather expectantly, hoping he would ask her to train, but he didn't. She wanted to show her new powers that she had gained since she had been away.

Goku studied Pan. My had she grown, and become more powerful, it would be great to train her, after all, seeing that she had a lot of potential. She could probably go super saiyin-jin if she wanted to.

Vegeta came into the room. He snorted when he saw Goku, and saw Pan laughing while he was on the floor. He saw that she had probably snuck up on Goku and pulled him down. He snickered. She had potential. She could probably go super saiyin-jin if he could trigger it.

"Pan, want to train?" Goku and Vegeta both asked at the same time.

"Uh, sure, let me just go and get my training gi on first." She said, and then she went to her room.

"Since when do you want to train somebody in my family?" asked Goku.

"She has potential, and we could need it in case of an emergency you know." Vegeta answered back.

"Well, ok, we'll both work together. Veggie?" Goku asked.

"What Kakarott?"

"Have you seen a female super saiyin-jin before?"

"No, but that's why I am willing to train your grand-brat."

"Ok, I haven't either, but let's go and find out."

Trunks stared at his father. Vegeta had never really willingly trained him either, now he was paying special attention to her? How unfair was that?

"Could I help? You guys could teach her while I am fighting her." Trunks asked, hoping the answer was yes.

Goku looked over at Trunks.

"Sure!" He said.

Trunks went to go get his training things on.

"Ok, now we can just sit and teach, how's that sound Vegeta?"

"Ok, I guess, but after Trunks is worn out, I get to fight her next.

Oh and by the way Kakarott, don't go easy on Pan. You saw how she snuck up on you when you weren't even being conscious of her." Vegeta pointed out.

"Don't worry, I won't" And they went off to train.

So, how did you guys like the remade version? A lot better, huh? Well, I need 5 reviews to keep going on this!