A/N: Hi everyone! I'm Princezgeekchic and a few days I read this story after falling in love with the movie spirit all over again. I was watching it all through finals. Haha! But anyway I read the three chapters that were written by the original author everlasting oranges and was so bummed when they didn't update in literally 13 years. Like forever right? So I don't think they would mind if I added onto it bit right? ;)

I saw those comments wanting them to continue with it and like damn! I want that too! I think they got bored of it like they said so hot diggity I'm gonna take a stab at it. I promise I'm not trying to steal from the author. I just sincerely believe this story has too much potential to left alone. If the original writer comes back I will cease the uploading of chapters.

The author got a really good start on it. I loved the chapter that had Spirit's dream in it. And I kept thinking about it sooooo...here is. I'll try not to make chapters too long because I am prone to writing like 6000 words a chapter which I don't think anyone wants to read lol. Also I will try to make all chapters eventful because the original author had a really nice pace going. I hope you like it!


Spirit quietly grazed near his fiancé Rain as he tried his best to properly pay attention to small talk between both of them. She was had been so excited since arriving, thinking about how fulfilled their lives would finally be once they were married…how they would be even happier once they had children of their own running around. And of course, Spirit felt the same way. He too wanted to start a family with the mare he'd come to love more deeply than the rivers that ran through his homeland. His mother passed by just as he suppressed a yawn. She looked at him for a moment before smiling, making a light comment that maybe he'd stayed up too long the night before patrolling the area. The stallion could only smile back weakly at her, trying to conceal how disturbed he was feeling over the real problem he was having since finally returning home. In reality, the stallion had been haunted by the nightmare he had a few days ago. It was centered around Fire and her filly, which were the causes of his distress. He only recently found out that Misty was his. His! What could he do? Fire had already threatened to tell the entire herd that Misty was his. And then what? His future would surely crumble before him. He would have to break off his engagement to Rain because not only would she despise him, but their tradition dictated that the leader must marry and remain loyal to the mare who bore his first born. And according to Fire, that was her. Sprit shuddered inwardly. The thought of losing Rain and marrying Fire, some pony who was a complete stranger to him at this point was completely terrifying.

He stuffed another grass full into his mouth to district himself. An elegant leg moved closer to him. His love's face leaned down as she herself also began to graze in the same spot. He looked at Rain and both of them shared a loving nuzzle. They went back to eating. A small smile crossed his face before it quickly disappeared. He did…he wanted to have a life full of love and children with Rain…but how could he do that with Fire's threat hovering over his head? The stallion didn't even know if he'd ever be able to have any peace of mind again. Annoyed, he dug his hoof into a patch of dirt. He looked around, happy to see that Rain had not noticed. His ears perked up, hearing the happy giggle of a filly. The stallion lifted his head to see the filly Misty running around, between the legs of the other horse, who would only laugh at her antics. She had so much energy. He strained his eyes a bit to get a better look at her. She had a light golden coat that seemed to have glistened in the sunlight. Her long dark mane flowed freely behind in the wind. She playfully bit at the one of the twin foals tails and ran. The foal followed behind her, but Spirit couldn't help but note that he could never even come close to her. A fast one, she was. Spirit blinked, as he heard the filly laugh again, calling out to her mother.

"Mommy! Mommy! Catch me!", she said, happily running between Fire's legs. The mare laughed, showing a soft, loving expression that was so different from the vindictive demeanor she had been showing since his arrival. He saw Fire lightly gallop after her, laughing again.

"You're too fast for me, honey", she said, nipping at Misty who had ran between her legs again. She pretended to trip on something, laying on her side. When the filly ran up to her poking at her with her snout, the mother mare licked at her cheek before galloping away.

"Gotcha!", she said, teasing her daughter.

"No fair!", the filly squealed, running after the auburn coated horse.

Spirit watched them happily run about each other until they were on a grassy hill. Fire playfully, tugged at Misty's dark mane and suddenly looked in his direction. The stallion wanted to look away hut he already knew that his was caught. The mare was already throwing daggers at him in her menacing stare. He saw her eyes move to Rain, who was still grazing, and she smiled mischievously. She was obviously still scheming against him. The mare could not be trusted. The stallion decided that he would act like Fire and her filly didn't exist. He snorted and turned his back towards her, dipping his head into a grassy patch as he ate more. Spirit could still feel Fire's menacing glare on his skin, stinging him more than the hottest of summer heats.


The night air peacefully blew through the clear sky as stars cast their gentle glow in the grasslands. Fire comfortably lay in a soft patch of grass looking out at the moon. She raised her head, hearing the sound of her daughter laughing in the near distance. She sighed happily. That did not sound like she was washing up at the nearby water hole as she had been told. She called out to the filly, trying not to be loud as to wake others who may have fallen asleep. Misty continued laughing. Fire lazily raised herself from her spot and walked over to see the filly in the distance chasing a firefly that that she probably wasn't going to catch.

"Misty, what are you doing? It's time for bed", the mother said with a yawn.

The filly pouted but nonetheless happily followed her mother back to their spot. As they walked, Fire purposely swished her tall tail in the nearby tall grass, causing a swarm of fire flies to come out into the night. She smiled, hearing Misty yelp in delight. The filly happily hopped up and down as the lights from the insects danced around her. Fire laid back down, beckoning her child to join her. The filly laid by her side, snuggling in close to her mother's warm belly. Fire laid her tail across her back, watching as Misty's eye lids began to flutter in drowsiness. A few moments later, she was fast asleep. Fire let out a silent laugh, wondering how such an energetic filly could fall asleep the minute she was next to her. In her sleep, Misty moved even closer. The mare licked her daughter's face before laying down herself. She felt so blessed to have such a lovely filly. Misty…she was sweet and loving, and liked to help those around her. She…deserved a father. Fire breathed hard, feeling her anger towards Spirit boil. That damn stallion had immediately rejected her…his own daughter! He didn't want her, he said…no correction, he said he didn't want it. As if she were some random object! The mare grit her teeth, angrily casting a glance towards a small grassy hill where Rain and Spirit were sleeping. All she could feel was her anger and resentment. He had been with her first…he had promised to love her. She thought they both felt the same way. That was the only reason why she…Fire shook her head, laying back down and closing her eyes. He'd mated with her and dumped her. Did he have any idea how humiliating that was? It should be her being betrothed to Spirit, not some random cow looking horse. But knew she was kidding herself. Damn mare was absolutely breathtaking to look at. This only made her anger sting at her even more. It was like Spirit traded up for a better mate. She scoffed to herself, wondering if Spirit had purposely gotten himself captured to avoid being with her. Fire gazed at Misty's sleeping figure, watching her sleep, how cute she looked when she breathed. It was especially adorable how her eye would flutter in her sleep. Her daughter was too sweet for this world. Fire let out a silent angry neigh. One way or another, Spirit was going to accept their daughter, and her too. She was going to make sure of it.


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