Hi people! Latest poem from moi!
This is inspired from vampires and has creepy vampiric themes to it.
It's Takao talking to his lover, can you guess who?

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LETS DANCE WITH THE DEVILS

Hurt me 'til I cry,
Cut me 'til I bleed,
Kill me 'til I die
Deprive me 'til I feed

Let's dance with the devils,
Let's fall with the dammed,
Let's thrive in the darkness,
Let's kill all we can.

Laugh 'til I sob,
Kick me 'til I'm on the floor.
Hate me 'til I pray to god
Love me 'til I run out the door

Let's dance with the devils,
Let's fall with the dammed,
Let's thrive in the darkness,
Let's kill all we can.

Crack me until I break,
Pry until my will dissolves,
Give me more than I can take,
Hit me 'til this problems solved

Let's dance with the devils,
Let's fall with the dammed,
Let's thrive in the darkness,
Let's kill all we can.

Then I'll turn the tables on you,
And see how you fare,
I'll drink deep from within you,
And laugh at your despair

Let's dance with the devils,
Let's fall with the dammed,
Let's thrive in the darkness,
Let's kill all we can.

Let's dance with the devils,
Let's fall with the dammed,
Let's thrive in the darkness,
Let's kill all we can.

Let's go.

So, tell me what you think. Constructive criticism and flamers welcome.