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Normal speech "There is a Gerbil on your head" she whispered to me.

Thoughts 'Oh god how will I get this furry thing off me!' I thought worriedly.

Greater being / Writing " Hey! Who are you calling a Gerbil you puny insect!" Boomed a voice from up above my head.

Techniques "Get the hell off my head you furry no jutsu!"

Into The Clouds

Chapter One: The End

It was a beautiful day in Karakura town. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, kids were playing in the park, and the Death god were killing beautiful creatures named hollows. But that's not where we are at right now...

Back In the elemental countries, Konoha and the other four nation had teamed up and went to war against Sound and the Akatsuki when they learned about Madara's moon eye plan. The Sound village was easily taken out without it's Otokage. The Akatsuki was also no match for the 5 villages combined, as they were growing less and less member each day Madara decided to make Sasuke the bait for the last jinchūriki and separate him from his allies. The battle between Sasuke and Naruto was very intense but in the end Naruto won with his sage chakra and his rasenshuriken. As Naruto was tired from his battle with Sasuke, Madara took the opportunity and went to capture the jinchūriki. Alas it was the exact time that Kyuubi decided to give most of his chakra to Naruto when he detected the Immortal sharingan user. With the 8 tails power within his full control Naruto decided he will today put an end to the forth war.


Destruction, chaos and disorder would describe the place. Naruto panted as he was on all fours glaring at a one armed Madara, "Bastard why won't you stay down!" shouted Naruto tired of using most of his strongest techniques that only managed to take out Madara's one eye Rinnegan and his left arm. Madara glared back at Naruto with his sharingan, "Don't you see foolish brat I Madara am immortal I will never die, and not certainly by a brat like you." Madara said cockily knowing that calling Naruto a brat would piss him off. Naruto stared at him with cold blue eyes then he smirked, "I guess this brat will prove you wrong then huh? Replied Naruto. Naruto quickly did some hand seals and shouted "Tengoku no Keimusho"(1) with that a white light appeared binding both Madara and Naruto. "What have you done!" yelled Madara fear clear evident in his eye when he realised that the Jutsu was absorbing his chakra at a blinding speed. Naruto smirked at this and replied " Tengoku no Keimusho is a technique that I created for a last line of defence against you! It absorbs both the user and his victims chakra until they both run out and die." Madara looked at Naruto mortified "But you will also die with me! Do you think your life is that worthless boy!" he yelled desperately trying to get Naruto to undo the Jutsu. The jinchuriki smiled sadly "Of course not! I still want to become a Hokage, but if this is the only way to end this war and kill you then so be it!" yelled Naruto and began to feel pain from the jutsu. Knowing the last of his chakra was slipping away from him Madara cried out "Damn you Namikaze! Damn you to hell! Don't think this is over, I will come and find you in the after life and kill you over and over again!" with that his corpse fell to the ground. Naruto barely heard him as he was experiencing considerable amount of pain as his Kyuubi chakra was leaving his body "Looks like I finally managed to kill that teme and now everyone is saved!" said Naruto through his gritted teeth as pain increased ten fold.

"Naruto-kun!" came a angelic voice from behind him, he didn't need to turn to know that the voice belong to his friend Hinata.

Naruto fell towards the ground as he couldn't stand no more, but Hinata caught him gently and put his head on her laps.

She was crying, but as the moon light hit her it made her look more beautiful than ever as she wept for Him. "Naruto-kun why did have to die?" she asked between her sobs. Naruto didn't have any energy left enough to answer her. She continued "I waited for a chance all these years to tell you that I..."her mouth moved but he couldn't make out of what she said, as darkness took him over.

Chapter End


Also right now Naruto is 16 and he looks the same way as Shippuden for now.

I will try to update it weakly if people like it.

(1) Heaven's Prison - Let's the user choose a victim and covers both with a prison made of light and eats away both the victim and users chakra until both of them die.(Suicide technique)


Omoke: Alternative Death

Destruction, chaos and disorder would describe the place. Naruto panted as he was on all fours glaring at a one armed Madara, "Bastard why won't you stay down!" shouted Naruto tired of using most of his strongest techniques that only managed to take out Madara's one eye Rinnegan and his left arm. Madara glared back at Naruto with his sharingan, "Don't you see foolish brat I Madara am immortal I will never die, and not certainly by a brat like you." Madara said cockily knowing that calling Naruto a brat would piss him off. Naruto stared at him with cold blue eyes then he smirked, "I guess this brat will prove you wrong then huh? Replied Naruto.

Naruto quickly did some hand seals and shouted "Harem no Jutsu!" Madara went flying back from the nose bleed and died from the blood loss. Naruto stood there for a minute or two shocked that his technique actually worked "Wow! Yes I win! I will be the best Hokage ever!" A Kunai pierces through Naruto's stomach and he realizes it is dripped in poison. The blonde jinchuriki looks at his murderer to see Sasori behind him smirking. "You!" Naruto calls out as he stumbles and falls on the ground dead. Hinata appears at the scene and looks at the dead body on the ground "Oh my god! You killed Naruto-Kun! gasps Hinata. Sakura then appears out of no where and yells "You bastard!" she then proceeds cracks her knuckles.