Okay so I know from experience that no one reads these.

This is my first story plus I'm not a native English speaker ( but I'm kind of an perfectionist about it so if you see any mistakes let me know. It's something I always wanted to write, it's been on my head for a while but I'm a really shitty writer so I'm sorry. I'm more of a reader myself.


It was Friday in Miami. The birds sang through the sound of the crowd of people about to leave the mall as they bragged about the shopping they had done. Ally had just finished her shift at the store and she couldn't be more relieved.
Now don't take her wrong, she loves to work, but it was Friday which meant the weekend was finally here. Sure she had to work Saturday morning, but she didn't care as long as she had the afternoon to herself.
Trish, Dez and Austin were still in the store.
Trish had showed up recently. Recently being, 2 hours. She got fired of her job earlier today and, Trish being Trish, she decided since it was Friday she could rest a little.
Dez, well, Dez was being Dez. He had showed up around 4:30 yelling something about a Koala and a scale model of the Eiffel tower but she hadn't payed him a lot of attention.
Her attention had been dragged to his blond friend. She had to figure out what to do about him. To be fair, the whole partner thing, wasn't working out for her. He always expected her to have time to write new songs for him even though he knew she had a tight schedule.
To help the situation, she didn't trust him.
The male currently playing video games at her practicing room was defenitly not worth her trust. Not only he had stolen her song as he embarrassed her in national TV.
She wanted to end the partner ship. It wasn't going to work.
Her thoughts were inturupted by foot steps not the stairs.
" Hey Ally! I guess Were going home for now, it's getting really late. Are you coming with us? "

She slammed her book closed as she quickly turned to him.
" Yes, let me just go get my jac-
A beam of light erupted out of nowhere. It was so bright she had to look away so that it wouldn't blind her and even so, she was still afraid it would. The light became less brighter and now it was only an oval of white glow right next to the grand piano. She ran to protect herself bellow the counter from the misterious bright hole in the music store.
Then something - even more - weird happened.
Something, or someone was pushed out of the hole craved in the air.
As he - Ally understood it was a guy - stood up, everyone looked at him.
" I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S WORKING. OH MY GOD IT IS WORKING ! " He shouted to nobody in special. As the guy turned around to finally face the four friends Ally couldn't believe her eyes.
" Are y-" she started.
" Ally! I'm Dez, I come from the future. "


So yeah, this is a really short first chapter but I just wanted to see if people liked the idea. If you do please review and if you don't also review, I don't take critiques bad, I actually would love to hear what you find bad in this if you do.

Buuuuut yeah, tell me if you would like to know the rest.