9 year old Gabriella Montez loved to go to Brooksdale Park with her mom Maria. As she saw the big sign that
welcomed
them, she tried to hurry her mom along. "Mom, come on. I want to get the good swing. Her mother was blind so
Gabriella
needed to guide her to the park. They were the only ones there when they arrived. Gabriella screamed with joy as she
ran to the only swing that didn't have any graffiti on it. Maria sat down on the most decent looking bench and took out
her
CD player. Gabriella always loved the swing. She loved the feeling of being high in the sky with the wind flowing
through
her black hair. She loved to close her eyes and feel the funny vibrations through her stomach as she came down. As
she was coming back down, her hands started to shake and her head began to hurt. She stopped the swing and
gritted her teeth in pain. "Whats happening to me?" She thought. She closed her eyes and everything was blue and
fuzzy. She saw the park, but not from where her position is. She was seeing through the bushes that were right behind
her. Gabriella was looking at herself. "This is strange. Why am i seeing myself through those bushes?" Then,the
thought hit her like a bolt of lightning. "I'm not watching myself. I'm in another person's point of view." She gasped.
"Someone is watching me!." Gabriella's vision ended and she whipped her head around but saw no sign of anyone
watching her. Just as she was going to get off the swing, a large cold hand closed tightly around her small, warm neck
and before she could even comtemplate to tell herself to scream for help, she felt a sharp pain at the back of her
head. A mysterious man put the large bat that had collided into the poor girls head into a batbag and laughed as the
helpless little girl fell crumpled into a heap. As he walked out the gate of Brooksdale Park he smiled, knowing he was
in the clear because the only witness was blind and had headphones on completely unaware of what just happened.
First Chapter is up!! .. how'd you like it. If you review i will give you a large cookie :)
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