A/N after last Tuesdays episode, like a lot of people I wasn't happy with the supermarket scene so I decided to write my own version, this is my first Gilmore Girls fic so please don't be too mean though I do appreciate constructive criticism. Picks up with the supermarket scene.

"Hey," said Luke.

"Well I guess both of us avoiding Doose's didn't work out that well huh," said Lorelai.

"Well I wasn't avoiding Doose's, this is just the closet market to Liz and TJ's house."

"Right, because you're not affected by this, you're not mad, I forgot."

"Well I… I was mad, I was really mad."

"Yea, I kind of figured."

"I know I was a jerk, I was just mad."

"I was the jerk, I was such a jerk."

"Well, I'm not mad anymore, well that's not true but I won't be, you know, eventually. Really."

"Yea?"

"Yea."

"Okay."

"It's not your fault, it's not my fault, it's just were not right together, you know, your you and I'm me. I just want to stop pretending were something else. You don't belong with me, you belong with someone like Christopher, and I just… let's just stop fighting it. OK? You can go back to being Lorelai Gilmore and I'll go back to being the guy in the diner who pours your coffee."

"My hands getting cold."

"Okay."

"Okay."

(Lorelai's POV.)

'Guy in the diner who pours you coffee, GUY IN THE DINER WHO POURS ME COFFEE, DO I MEAN NOTHING TO HIM! He looked really sad though, maybe he still loves me and he wants me back, STOP IT, Lorelai Gilmore you are not one of those girls, you do not wait around hoping he loves you back. You always say something, you never wait, but why aren't you saying anything now. Why are you talking to yourself. SAY SOMETHING!

"You know your not just the guy whose in the diner and pours me coffee." Did

I just say that aloud?

"What?' said Luke, 'oh crap I did say that aloud.'

"Your more than that to me, Luke, I love you." Oh god I need to stop myself before I say something stupid well too late for that I guess.

"You sure have a funny way of showing it."

"Damn it, Luke! I can't take this anymore. You have no right to treat me like shit, okay yea I did sleep with Christopher that night, but we broke up. We broke up right after you refused to MARRY ME! You said you loved me yet you didn't tell me about your daughter for 2 months Luke, two months, and I forgave you for that. I even postponed our wedding to give you some time to adjust. I never wanted to postpone the wedding and it killed me to do it, but I did it because that's what you wanted and I loved you so I did it. Then you just, I don't know, forgot about me. You never introduced me to April, you never moved into my house completely, you wouldn't let me help with April, you barely even came to see me. I'm sorry but I couldn't take it anymore. After I talked to the shrink I figured out a way to make it all better, by asking you to get married right then and there. Now I realize giving you an ultimatum might not have been the best thing, but god Luke, you said no. You said NO! Do you realize how much that hurt, do you? There was only one way to make you feel that hurt and I knew how to do it. So I slept with Christopher to hurt you I guess. I know that sounds like a stupid excuse but I don't care. I wanted you to hurt just as much as I did! So do not give me your pity bull shit okay!" Stupid, stupid Lorelai, look what you've done now, oh god I practically screamed that. People are looking now, oh they want a show, great I'll give them one.

"I asked you to marry me and you said no. Do not blame this on me okay. People that have no lives are starring at us after I just pulled a Mariah Carey-like meltdown and my hand is getting cold. I… I have to go, bye Luke." Wow great one Gilmore say all of that and just leave.

A/N well there you have it I think I should continue, maybe not. Constructive criticism pleaseeee! Any story, plot lines, reference lines, or even speaking lines are welcomed. I hope you like this; I'm pretty sure if I continue I know where I'm going. I won't tell you what's going to happen though, it will ruin the surprise. Please review!

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