Kay, well, today I was just wondering how confusing a fanfic would be without puncuation, so I made this. Review and tell me if you thought it was as confusing as I thought it was. This story isn't the best, but I didn't want to go and make a huge good story on something like this.
Go to chapter two to see this with puncuation.
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Hey Brenda Holly yelled as she stirred her coffee it was Mocha and it was really good
Dont call me Brenda you freak Shannen slapped Holly playfully Holly smiled
Hey wheres Alyssa Julian asked
Oh shes outside right now with Rose answered Kit the Cat Everyone stared and gasped for Kit had talked Lots of Wows came from around the room
Suddenly the doorbell rang Ill get it said Julian and he and Brian ran to the door It ended up being Aaron Spelling
Hey everyone Party I see isnt that so cute anyway I just stopped by to see if you guys were up for dinner tonight Brenda I hope you come especially
Everyone STOP CALLING ME BRENDA Shannen yelled loudly and almost knocked Aaron down
Watch it Aaron yelled and they all laughed together and Alyssa entered with Rose
Hey guys wheres the party I wanna go she said and they laughed some more Okay now seriously where is it
Hahaha Alyssa said Brian and they smiled Ok whats so funny about that absoultly nothing so dont laugh
Okay well I gotta go Shannen said not so comfortable being around Rose After all Rose was her replacement See you guys later
Bye honey call you later or you call me Holly hugged Shannen and she left
No come back said Rose I want to get to know you I know that sounds rushed but even though I replaced you I think that you could give me some tips on how to act like a witch
Shannen wasn't sure how to react after all she barely knew the gal but she decided to give her a try
Yeah stay please Alyssa said and smiled
Shannen returned the smile Maybe me and Alyssa can patch things up now she thought
They all went in smiling and laughing
Go to chapter two to see this with puncuation.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey Brenda Holly yelled as she stirred her coffee it was Mocha and it was really good
Dont call me Brenda you freak Shannen slapped Holly playfully Holly smiled
Hey wheres Alyssa Julian asked
Oh shes outside right now with Rose answered Kit the Cat Everyone stared and gasped for Kit had talked Lots of Wows came from around the room
Suddenly the doorbell rang Ill get it said Julian and he and Brian ran to the door It ended up being Aaron Spelling
Hey everyone Party I see isnt that so cute anyway I just stopped by to see if you guys were up for dinner tonight Brenda I hope you come especially
Everyone STOP CALLING ME BRENDA Shannen yelled loudly and almost knocked Aaron down
Watch it Aaron yelled and they all laughed together and Alyssa entered with Rose
Hey guys wheres the party I wanna go she said and they laughed some more Okay now seriously where is it
Hahaha Alyssa said Brian and they smiled Ok whats so funny about that absoultly nothing so dont laugh
Okay well I gotta go Shannen said not so comfortable being around Rose After all Rose was her replacement See you guys later
Bye honey call you later or you call me Holly hugged Shannen and she left
No come back said Rose I want to get to know you I know that sounds rushed but even though I replaced you I think that you could give me some tips on how to act like a witch
Shannen wasn't sure how to react after all she barely knew the gal but she decided to give her a try
Yeah stay please Alyssa said and smiled
Shannen returned the smile Maybe me and Alyssa can patch things up now she thought
They all went in smiling and laughing
