Summary; I wrote this in English but without Troy and Gabriella's names. I added them in later when my friend commented that it reminded her of T&G. What do you guys think? Leave it has 'he/she the boy/girl' or put Troy and Gabriella's names in? This has to be a story on 'tone' and I picked hurt. What do you guys think? It can be as short or as long as I like. Would you guys change anything? Add any little bits in?
"Look, just leave it, Troy!" Gabriella shouted, turning her head nearly whipping Troy in the face with her ponytail. She turned, ready to walk out the open door. "Gabi, don't do this to me, please." he whispered, grabbing her hand as she tried to wake away from him. Away from 'them.' "It just isn't worth it anymore." she said, tears freely running down her face, leaving a trail of mascara behind them. Seeing her well up, a single tear traveled down Troy's cheek as he watched the love of his life run out the door, slamming it behind her.
