I'm writing about the store of Cam and Maya I find this story tragic yet I can relate to cams feelings. This is my first story on fan fiction I would appreciate some feed back.

Cam story

Suicide tempts me every time I swallow all because this destructive life leads,

And the paths I follow. I don't know who I am anymore.

"I'm invisible to myself and will soon be to everyone who once cared.

Maya, my parents ….. I'm sorry

Tears fall down my face I can feel my breathing getting worse

My life, what life I'm a slave to hockey, everything all down the drain,

The only love of my life and all my family left in pain.

I'm sorry everyone, I'm sorry for all I've done,

But the pain will end now; it will all end once I'm gone.

I slice to wrist, an cut to the throat, as I wait to die

I think of everyone I love ….

I can feel my heart slowing down and my breathing coming to a halt.

With the smell of blood in the air, I watch it flow out from my wrist.

Why wont I die already, I shut my eyes waiting for it to be over

"omigod cam " the voice sounds so familiar am I dead all ready as I can hear footsteps closing in

"Cam stays with me "I open my eyes and see Maya leaning over me

I sit still not wanting to it to end as I take a closer look; everything is so blurry from my tears

I look into Maya's eyes … something's not write why would an angel be crying

I try to speak but I cant find my voice, I don't want this anymore as I see my angel hovering over me crying like she just lost someone close. Maybe im not dead yet.

Is this really Maya, "no no no" she wasn't suppose to see this

I see her reach out for her phone dialing numbers, I can't make them out.

Now I really wish I was dead "I find myself breathing harder as the rooms spins

Death will soon be here. I take one look at Maya

She looks so beautiful I whisper my final words "I love you".

As everything turns dark, I can hear sirens from a far.