*A/N: Hey all! So, here is Wizardmuggle and Love-stands-out's My Immortal commentary. We do not own J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter or Tara's My Immortal "writing" (Thank goodness) We hope you enjoy and pleaseeee review. It means the world to us as young writers. Flames... well... they're welcome as long as they're for Tara :)
Oh, and we own all the stuff that looks like this: *Hehe, I just found a rainbow, butterfly slinkey. I know you're all jealous!*
Wizardmuggle will look like this: *I love Harry Potter*
Love-stands-out will look like this: *I love Harry Potter*

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) *NO* 2 my gf (ew not in that way) *Some rather gross and disturbing immages are running through my head right now. Thanks so much... Not* raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling.*HOW much spelling did she help you with?* U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! *I hope that she's talking about Bieber and that she's making his life horrible. (Crosses fingers)* MCR ROX!

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way *I think I'm going to throw up...it's like the emo version of Mary Rainbow Sparkle Unicorn Sue.* and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) *So, your parents named you after your hair...* with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!) *BYE!* I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major f***ing hottie. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. *Excuse me, but I own Hot Topic stuff, and trust me, I'm not even close to being a "goffik"* For example today I was wearing *I have a feeling that every chapter's going to have a wonderful (haha, yeah) clothing description...* a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining *at the same time? I wanna see THAT!* so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. *Well aren't you a little innocent girl.*

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly. *Draco...shy?...sorry Love-stands-out, but he's a big, stuck-up, pain in the a**.*
*Shut up! My poor Draco... sniff, sniff. Run, Dray! Run from this b**ch! (If you couldn't tell, Draco's my favorite) ;)*

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. *She has FRIENDS? Wow*

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!

*A/N: *Okay, that's enough for today, please review, and we'll do more!* But sadly, I don't have internet until late Monday, so the next chapter update might not be for a while. Love to all!... And review, review, review!**