The Black Walker
Chapter 1
A.N. this is the first story I've decided to share with the world!! Sorry it's childishly written I don't like to rewrite because I end up changing things then the story ends up suckish. Like I said first story so plz be kind but critique is appreciated, enjoy (hopefully)
Danny walker aka Mr. Hotness, he was tall and lean with muscles rippling through his shirt. I stared –along with every other girl in the class- as he took his seat in the back next to me. He ran his fingers through his jet black hair as he settled into his seat. I could feel my face reddening…what was it about Danny that made me act like a little school girl?
"Danny?" Ms. Russo asked the answer to a question I hadn't even heard
"If I were paying attention I'd know the answer" Danny said grinning as he removed his headphones
I giggled -complete 5 year old giggle- as the class laughed
The bell rung…
Ms. Russo shook her head "don't forget to read" she called out
In my rush to gather my things I dropped my books. And there he was Mr. Hotness picked up my things!! My heart was racing as I reached for them
"Thanks "I flushed
He just nodded then left.
Danny.
Tall and mysterious Danny, dangerous and sexy Danny. Danny had a reputation and not a good one either, he smokes, he drinks, he rides a motorcycle, and he has a criminal record. Ok so maybe half of those were rumors but Danny doesn't deny it…
There were other rumors though those were just plain fictional … Mr. Hotness was... a vampire. It is weird though how pale he is and is abnormally beautiful, though who am I to judge I put a boy in a coma! I was in eighth grade and the boy had been checking me out, I was flattered and let him continue from my legs to my upper body then he smiled. I looked over then he just sat there staring into my eyes my golden-silver eyes… he seemed so infatuated then he just fainted… I've been wearing contacts ever since…
I snapped out of my trance to find Danny staring at me his wise dark eyes seemed endless, and the weirdest thing happened he smiled...at me! I smiled back and was about to wave maybe even go over when he got up and left …
END CHAPTER 1
A.N : oh dear god that sucked - or did it?- plz comment or I'll get discouraged and stop writing
