A/N: Hello this is me and me is as you all know a crappy writer. Hopefully in this most recent story my grammar spelling and capitalization will all be better and you will be able to enjoy this story in top form.
This is rated T for language
Sorry if the characters seem OOCish
Disclaimer:I don't own Demon Diary
It was raining. Raenef could hear it pattering on the stone walls of the castle. Sometimes he wondered where all that rain came from. Eclipse told him that rain was caused by moisture gathering in the clouds getting heavier and heavier until it all comes down in a great shower of wetness and, if you didn't have an umbrella or a rain-coat, misery.
Raenef thought Eclipse was wrong. He was sure that whenever it rained there was a goddess weeping somewhere in the heavens. He imagined that she was very beautiful with aqua hair and ruby red eyes. Raenef believed that every time it rained it meant the goddess was crying. Eclipse thought this was total utter nonsense. He avoided the subject like it was the plague and tried not to talk about it as much as he could.
Raenef sighed loudly and Eclipse looked up from the thick book he was reading and frowned "What's the matter my lord?"
"Nothing Eclipse and may I request yet again that you call me by my name" Raenef said with a pointed look at his teacher, servant, friend.
"yes my l-Raenef" Eclipse sighed "but seriously…Raenef I know that something is wrong, I wasn't ranked as one of the top demons for nothing you know" this time it was Eclipse's turn to give Raenefthe pointed look instead of the other way around. "is it the rain?" Eclipse questioned. Raenef slowly nodded.
"Yes...it is the rain, she is crying." Eclipse winced wishing he hadn't asked.
"Why do you feel you need to continue this foolishness Raenef? she is not real and you probably know that but you still continue to believe! why!" Raenef's eyes narrowed and the look in them got as close as they could go to anger.
"Because I simply believe" Raenef almost snapped "now Eclipse as your master I wish for you to leave me for a moment." Eclipse's eyes widened in shock, hurt, anger and abruptly shut down. The violet iris's almost seeming to swirl. "as you wish my lord" Eclipse shoved Raenef's earlier request in his face said go and vanished with a huff of displaced air. Raenef sighed and closing his eyes leaned back in his seat.
"And I Eclipse am not a demon lordfor nothing either. I know you're hiding something from me and I'm going to find out exactly what."
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