Alright, I've made some changes to the main Tales of Vesperia storyline:

-Party manages to kill Alexei before he accidentally releases the Adephagos

-Sodia is NOT Flynn's second-in-command because I really, really hate her. She's the captain of the Sodia Brigade.

-Yuri isn't stabbed on top of Zaude; Duke DOES get back Dein Nomos

-Despite all of this, Belius is turned into Undine, Phaeroh dies from the wounds he recieved at Zaude and is turned into Efreet, Khroma and Gusios are killed by the Hunting Blades and are turned into Sylph and Gnome.

-Aurnion has not been build

-There is a sudden Entelexeia outbreak


"Dammit, we lost it!" Shu gritted out. He, Jiro, Kluke, Marumaro, and Bouquet were chasing a Shadow, Balaur (Blue Dragon Plus, anyone?), who had been in a state of hibernation until just recently. He had been causing havoc and destruction in the towns and cities for a week now.

"We'll need to spread out and find him," Kluke said. "We can't allow that Shadow to give us the slip again."

"Right!" the other four replied. They fanned out in different directions in the forest they were in, checking under every rock or shrub for any signs that Balaur was hiding.

After what seemed like an eternity, Bouquet shouted, "Come look at this you guys!"

Rushing over to the clearing Bouquet was in they saw what she was talking about. In front of them was a black distortion.

"It looks like a Dimensional Break," Kluke said.

"A Dimentional Break?" Shu echoed. Meanwhile, unseen by the other four, Marumaro was walking over to the break.

"A Dimentional Break is a rip in time-space. It- Marumaro! Don't touch that!" Kluke suddenly screamed. Everyone turned to see Marumaro touch the Dimensional Break and suddenly vanish right in front of them. Kluke ran forward, looking over her shoulder. "Come on, we need to follow Marumaro!"

The others exchanged glances before following Kluke into the Dimensional Break.


"Hey I think they're waking up!"

"Really? They still look totally out of it."

"Mist, please just help me out,"

"Yes sir..."

Shu opened his eyes when he felt someone nudging him. Crouched over him was a blonde haired man with blue eyes and wearing a blue and white tunic with armor.

"I see you're awake now," The man said. "My name's Flynn Scifo. What's yours?"

"It's Shu," Shu replied, sitting up and looking around. A silver haired girl wearing a uniform identical to Flynn's had just finished waking up Shu's friends.

"Okay, they're up now, Commandant Flynn," the girl said, turning her golden eyes to Flynn. Flynn nodded.

"Thenk you, Mist."

"Where are we?" Bouquet asked.

"Wherever we are, it's not our own world," Kluke answered. Everyone stared at her.

"What do you mean, Kluke?" Shu asked.

"What I was going to say before that moron decided to go poking around was that a Dimensional break can send you into a world in a different dimension," Kluke said, shooting a glare at Marumaro.

"It was too tempting, maro!" Marumaro replied. Mist and Flynn gasped.

"Did that cat just talk?" Mist asked.

"Marumaro's not a cat. He's a Devee," Jiro replied. "A brain-damaged one at that."

"So can you tell us where we are?" Kluke asked.

"Our world is called Terca Lumires. Right now, we're just on the outskirts of the imperial capital, Zaphias," Flynn explained. "Now, can you tell us what you were talking about before? Something about a Dimensional Break."

"Oh, yes, a Dimensional Break can appear randomly in our world. Anyone who enters it can be sent to a world in another dimension."

"Sounds similar to a Phantom Rift," Mist commented.

"Well, Phantom Rifts were conjured up by Phaeroh. And they don't send you to a different dimension or time. Just into an illusion. Yormgen is an example," Flynn said.

"But think about it, sir," Mist replied. "If we could somehow use aer to make a replica of Phaeroh's Phantom Rifts, we could possible make it inter-dimensional. We could even send these guys back to their own world." Flynn shook his head.

"Sorry, but I didn't really understand what you just said. I'm not a blastia researcher."

"How can you turn air into something that can resemble a Dimensional Break?" Kluke asked.

"What do you mea- Oh! You're talking about the air we breathe. No, aer is the primeaval power that fills our world. It affects everything. It even powers our blastia," Mist explained. "And before you ask, blastia are essential to our way of life. They provide us with things like fire, water, light, and barriers to keep monsters out. Almost every town or city has a barrier blastia. For fighting, we use bohdi blastia." Mist held out her right arm. On her wrist was a thin golden bracelet with a red gem. "We can perform strike and magic artes with them."

"I'm totally lost," Shu said. Mist just froze and sweatdropped, her eye twitching.

"Is he always this stupid?" Mist asked the others.

"Pretty much," Jiro replied. Shu turned to glare at him.

"You're not helping!"

"Um, I'm a bit confused myself," Kluke said.

"They'll learn as they get used to Terca Lumires," Flynn said, stepping forward. "For now, we need to finish the monster patrol."

"Hold on, you keep mentioning monsters. Are there really monsters in this world?" Bouquet asked.

"You don't have monsters on yours? Don't you ever get bored?" Mist replied.

"We have barriers to protect the towns from them, but people traveling between towns are at risk of being attacked," Flynn said.

"Like right now!" Mist yelled, pulling out her sword. Shu heard growls and turned. Several black wolves with glowing red eyes were stalking toward them, teeth bared in a snarl.

"You guys stay back!" Flynn ordered Shu and the others, rushing over to stand next to Mist, puling out a blue sword. One of the wolves leapt and Mist changed her stance.

"O flickering blaze burn... Fireball!" A burst of fire shot out of nowhere in front of Mist, hitting the wolf, sending it squeaking back. It jerked once and lay still.

"Commandant Flynn, back me up while I cast another spell!" Mist yelled.

"Got it!" Flynn replied, rushing forward and cutting down one monster after another. A red circle appeared below Mist.

"O countless particles that wander the heavens, rain down and glorify the land... Meteor Storm!" As Mist spoke those last words, several gigantic fireballs appeared above Mist. "Commandant, watch out!"

Flynn nodded and leaped back behind Mist as the fireballs rained down on the monsters. Yelps and squeaks were cut short as the attack obliterated them, leaving only smoking craters behind.

"Well that's do- -" She cut off as two wolves leaped out of the bushes at her. She spun around. 'Oh shit!'

"Blue Explosion!" Mist covered her eyes as a blue beam took out both wolves. She turned to see Shu and a dragon behind him.

"Nice shot, Blue Dragon!" Shu said.

"I wish you had something a little more challenging for me to hit," Blue Dragon replied sharply. He vanished in a flash of blue.

"Wh-what was that?" Flynn asked, a bit shocked.

"That was my Shadow, Blue Dragon," Shu replied.

"We all have Shadows," Kluke explained. "However, only us and a few others in our world have the ability to summon a Shadow."

"A power not produced by blastia..." Mist muttered, intrugued. "A bit like Lady Estellise, what with her being the Child of the Full Moon after all."

"Let's head back to the castle," Flynn said, motioning with his hand for everyone to follow him. "We can talk more in there."


"I see," Flynn murmured, leaning back in the chair at his desk. "So that's how your world works."

"Imagine: A world without monsters!" Mist exclaimed.

"Yup, one interesting story indeed."

Shu saw Flynn and Mist jump at the sound of a newcomer's voice. They snapped their heads around to Flynn's window. Sitting in it was a man with long violet hair and onyx colored eyes. His clothing was all black. In his left hand was a katana and on his wrist was a bohdi blastia.

"Yuri, scare me like that again and I'll take Second Star and shove it up your ass!" Mist growled.

"Nice to see you too, Mist," Yuri replied, leaping off the window into the room.

"Yuri, I wish you would use the door more often," Flynn said, annoyance evident in his voice.

"Nah, doors are overrated. I actually swung by to pay Estelle a visit, but I happened to overhear you guys. Never would've imagined other worlds besides our own," Yuri replied, glancing at Shu and the others.

"I swear, you're like a little kid," Mist grumbled. "I really can't see how you and Commandant Flynn could be childhood friends."

"Sometimes I wonder myself," Flynn said, resting his forhead in his hand.

"Aw, I'm hurt," Yuri replied.

A few moments later, Flynn's door opened and a woman walked in. Her hair was a light purple pulled up into a bun and two long blue plumey feather-like...things...were coming out the back of her head (I know, I know, Judith has antennae, but its not like the Blue Dragon character do as well. It even took me until I got the Antennea Guard attachment that I figured out they were antennae, and it honestly freaked me out a little.) and elf-like ears and violet eyes. Her clothing was rather revealing. She was practically wearing a two piece swimsuit. Her gigantic breasts were threatening to slip over her top. She was carrying a large red spear on her back.

"Hey, Judy!" Yuri greeted.

"Judith, why are you here, too?" Mist asked. Judith just waved and looked over her shoulder.

"Hey, I found him!" Judith yelled. A moment later, more people came in. One was a teenage short brown haired girl with goggles on her head. She was wearing a bohdi blastia on her neck, red clothing, shorts, and mismatched socks. Next was a shorter boy who looked about Shu's age. His hair was brown and his shirt was green and white. He carried a large shoulder bag with a blastia core on it. Then there was a pink short haired girl who looked to be in her late teens. She had a pink and white dress on and green eyes. There was a purple and white dog who seemed to be keeping its distance from her. A large scar was over its closed left eye and its tail was shaped like a lightning bolt.A bohdi blastia was at the base of it. It carried a golden pipe in its mouth and had a dagger strapped to its right flank. Finally, there was a middle-aged man with spiky black hair tied up in a ponytail. His eyes were blue. He was wearing a large purple coat and black pants.

"There you are!" the brown haired girl exclaimed. "We've been looking all over for you, you know?!"

"Sorry, Rita," Yuri replied. "Guess I got a little sidetracked."

"Who are they?" Bouquet asked. The people turned to look at her and the others.

"Rita Mordio," Rita replied. "Genius mage in Aspio."

"I'm Karol Capel," the brown haired boy said. "I'm the leader of our guild, Brave Vesperia!"

"No one really cares," Rita mumbled.

"You suck, Rita!" Karol exclaimed. Rita spun around and smacked him hard onto the ground.

"Um, my name is Estellise, but you can call me Estelle," pink haired girl said, stepping forward.

"That's my partner, Repede," Yuri said, pointing to the dog. Repede barked in response.

"And I am the great and mighty-" the black haired man began to say before Rita cut in.

"Old man," she finished. The man turned on her.

"Fer the millionth time, it's Raven!" Raven exclaimed. Shu noticed Marumaro edging over to an unsuspecting Judith, fingers twitching as his boob radar went off.

"I can't take it anymore, maro!" Marumaro yelled, pouncing and grabbing onto a shocked Judith's chest. He began to bury his head in her breasts, drooling. "So soft! So soft!" Raven looked absolutely envious.

"Why the hell does he get ta touch yer boobs, Judith darlin', but not me!" Raven moaned. Rita spun around and planted her fist into his face.

"YOU PERVERTED CREEP!" Rita shreaked. Raven staggered back onto his feet, holding his bloody nose. Judith, meanwhile, had an incredibly rare look of rage on her face as she pryed the Devee off of her and chucked him into a potted plant, shattering the vase.

"Judith, be careful!" Flynn shouted, standing up from his desk.

"Um, so who are you guys?" Estelle asked.

"I'm Shu," Shu replied.

"Jiro."

"Kluke."

"Bouquet."

"M-Marumaro..." Marumaro was staggering back onto his feet, pieces of dirt still on his pot-like helmet.

"They're apparently from a different world than ours," Yuri said. "They wound up here chasing this Shadow of Balaur."

"Shadow of Balaur?" Rita asked.

"That idiot Devee decided to inspect the Dimensional Break that sent us here without thinking about what it might do," Jiro replied, crossing his arms. "Of course, I guess thinking isn't one of his strong points."

"I-I resent that...maro..." Marumaro said, still dizzy and looping around.

"Hold on, I'd like to hear your story, then," Rita said.

"Okay," Kluke replied. "Here's some bits about our world first..."


"So you guys have this Shadow power or whatever, and you're chasing this Shadow of Balaur that's been causing destruction in your world?" Rita asked when Kluke finished.

"Yes," Kluke replied.

"It could be possible that the Balaur escaped into the Dimensional Break as well, since you couldn't find it," Rita said.

"Come to think of it, you could be right," Shu replied. "If it did escaped into the Dimensional Break, then we have to find and stop it right away!"

"But what if you're wrong?" Bouquet asked. "It could still be in our world."

"I'll send out some Knights to investigate if any towns are being attacked," Flynn said. He turned to Mist. "Tell Captain Sodia that her brigade is to do this task."

"Yes sir!" Mist replied, saluting, before going into the castle halls. Flynn turned back to Shu and the others.

"As soon as we get word of attacks, Mist and I will assist you in bringing down the Shadow of Balaur."

"Don't forget about us!" Karol said. "Brave Vesperia will help out in any way we can!"

"Oh brother..." Rita mumbled. "Here he goes again..."

"Thanks, all of you," Shu said. "I'm sure that together we can finally take down the Balaur!"


Aaand that's chapter 1. As you may have already realized, I've added some of the Blue Dragon game elements into it as well, like the Shadow of Balaur and the Dimentional Break. I hope you enjoyed it and please review!