Ok- I haven't done a poem-fiction yet, so I'm going to try one. Review and tell me if you like it!

What can I call real

And what is all a dream

One oh nine and fast to heal

Skin as white as cream

Do I find comfort in the rising sun

Or wait for the eclipse

The war is over but no ones won

So silent I can hear the water drip

Romeo my Romeo

Why'd you ever have to go


What did you guys think about it???? It's basically Bella having an internal conflict with herself over who to choose. Please review!!!