Her lips. That's all he could taste right mow
Her smile. It lifted his heart up.
Her body. He wanted it so bad
He was in trouble. This wasn't supposed to happen. He knew they should have kept their emotions in.
He looked down at their wrists. They were glowing
This was bad. -
18 years earlier
Prince Maximus Alexander of Arendelle was born in February 10th. His Parents fell in love with him at first sight. They threw a massive ball in honor of his birth. The whole kind kingdom came and celebrated. They were seen as a perfect family they always went on picnics and they loved to go ice skating... however one day kristoff noticed something on Max's wrist.
"Anna I think… he has ice powers!" he gasped
"The trolls Kristoff! We have to bring him to the trolls!"
Flashback
"Grand pabbie! It's so nice to see you!" Kristoff greeted
"Kristoff we must discuss something. Where's Anna?"
"Grand Pabbie! What are you doing here?" she asked
"Anna, Kristoff I think we should talk about this somewhere private" he said looking around
They went over to the Meeting Room and sat down.
"What's wrong?" Anna asked
"I have something to tell you about your children."
"What!?" they asked in unison.
"I'm afraid to warn you that the first of your children to have ice powers could get out of hand."
"What do you mean?" kristoff asked
"If not given enough love in his/her childhood he/she could possibly freeze his/her own heart, his/her ice would have a much stronger effect than Elsa's."
"WHAT!?" They shouted looking at 7-month-old pregnant Anna.
Anna began to cry. Kristoff was shocked
"How can we stop that from happening?" they asked hope glimmering in their eyes.
"You must show him or her lots of love. Everyday 24/7. And the curse will stop."
"How did the curse start?"She asked looking at her stomach.
"After you heart froze a part of it stayed there even with the act of true love." Grand Pabbie explained.
"Does that mean he will get it?" Anna pointed to her stomach.
"Possibly. It will only happen to the first child who gets ice powers."
Present time
"Anna Kristoff. What's wrong?" Grand Pabbie worriedly asked
"I think he has…ice powers" Kristoff asked
Grand Pabbie quickly took him away to conduct a series of tests on Max. After a long time he finally came out of the hut with Max sleeping in his hands.
"I don't see anything wrong with him." Grand Pabbie assured
"What about this?" Kristoff pointed to the snowflake birthmark on Max's arm.
"I think it's only a birthmark." He assured.
They were safe. For now.
1 year later Anna and Kristoff welcomed Prince Ryan to the family and they bonded more than ever. Max loved to take picnics with all of them. His life felt perfect.
"Hurry up mommy" a 7 year old max called out
"I'm coming laughed Anna as she set down the picnic basket "Kristoff hurry up!"
"Ryan! Ryan! Let's play with the new kites we got!" Max exclaimed
As they played on the grass someone was watching them someone who wanted revenge someone who was no longer a prince, Hans
Hans ran to them
"Hey little boy what are you doing?" he asked
"I'm sorry sir I'm not supposed to talk to people I don't know..." he stated backing away grabbing Ryan's hand.
"Where do you think you're going" he sneered and picked Ryan up
"Ryan!" max screamed "Mommy Daddy he took Ryan'
Kristoff and Anna grabbed their horses and ran following Hans and they left Max all alone
"Kristoff he has RYAN I knew this was going to happen! I knew he wasn't going to leave us alone what do we do?" Anna cried
Suddenly they head a man scream "You're just like that MONSTER of a Queen!"
They rode on to the scene.
Ryan froze Hans's feet with ice
Anna gasped "He has powers Kristoff he's the first child to have ice powers" she whispered
"He can control it I'm sure don't worry." He assured but in reality he was so scared himself he took Ryan out of Hans arms (HANS WAS ALMOST FROZEN LIKE WHEN ANNA HEART FROZE)
They went back to the castle.
Max was confused he dad came up to him and said
"Why did you let him play with you?" he said
"But he didn't do anything ba-"
"HE COULD HAVE JUST KEPT HIS POWERS A SECRET AND THIS IS YOUR ENTIRE FAULT" Kristoff shouted
A tear rolled down his face
"Max wait I'm so-"Kristoff reached out for a hug but Max rejected him.
Max turned around and ran to his room running was all he knew how to do any way.
A Few weeks later…
Max wandered around the castle. He hasn't seen his mom or Ryan and he kind of hoped that his dad would have asked for forgiveness. But he didn't. He walked up the door and peered into the key lock. He saw his mom dad and Ryan having a swordfight
Anna kristoff Max
Mommy?
(knocking)
Do you wanna have a picnic?
Come on let's go and play.
I never see you anymore come out the door
It's like you've gone away
We used to be a family and know we're not
I wish you would let me in
Do you wanna have a picnic?
It doesn't have to be a picnic.
Not now Maximus
Okay, bye
"Ryan honey, try it." Anna cooed as she watched her son try using his magic. "Just know that we give you all of your love" Kristoff softly stated. -
A cheery 10 year old Maximus runs down the hall where Ryan's room is. His parents are giving him presents for no apparent reason. His holding his 1-year-old sister Lydia's hand and Olaf is right behind her.
(Knocking)
Do you wanna have a picnic?
Or watch Lydia trip and fall?
I think some company is overdue
I've started talking to the pictures on the wall.
(hang in their Tom)
It gets a little lonely
Just me and her *points to Lydia*
Just watching the hours tick by.
(Tic-Tock, Tic-Tock, Tic-Tock) -
A 12 year old Max and a 3-year old Lydia go down the hall to Ryan's room. Max hesitates and rushes past it.
"Auntie Elsa! What bring you here?" he asked
"Your mother is expecting a baby!" she happily cried
"A baby? YIPPE!" Olaf yelled
1 month later
Max couldn't really make out what the tall man with a bag was saying he heard an "I'm so sorry", "we did everything we could" and "miscarriage". His mo- Princess Anna wasn't going to have a baby wasn't she? The man bid them farewell and left. He hesitated and looked at Olaf. He was nodding
"Go on knock" he whispered
He knocked the door…
Dad?
Mom, I know you're in there
Lydia's been asking where you've been
Olaf says be brave for her, and I'm trying too
I'm right out here for you, just let me in.
We only have each other
We're family
Olaf what am I going to do?
…
Do you wanna have a picnic? He put his hand on his knees and cried.
On the other side of the door
"It's for his own good" Kristoff whispered to himself while comforting Anna
Too Bad they didn't know that Ryan wasn't the first child to have ice powers.
And that the birthmark the Max had actually meant something…
Guys I hope you like this! I edited the first part of the story and I personally think this is way better than the original!
Peace J
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