Woot! another story! i hope this one turns out good! I'll try to be realistic this time, anyone who reads this at LEAST give my others a TRY pleaaaase! and if you like Fire emblem and Pokemon then read my crossover Ike Marth and a mouse!
And i know that there may be a few grammar problems and i would like a little help with that, but i must say that I am home-schooled and my mom only really has me do math (boring!) so if you see some grammar problems then PLEASE let me know in your review if no one else has and i will fix it.
This takes place in a new range of territory and Clans the four Clans around here will be explained soon enough.
Flaresky, a young short-furred medicine cat of SouthClan, was a she-cat with an orange pelt, white tail tip and paws, and yellow eyes. She was walking through the beach of her territory she knew so well.
Just feeling the sand under her paws made her happy and comfortable.
She was walking along happily while waiting to cross paths with a bush of dock leaves.
Though sometimes her life was hard, she had never hated the life of a medicine cat. She knew it wasn't her that had picked to be one, but StarClan themselves. They told her that it was needed for her to become one for her Clan, for fate was catching up with the medicine cat Moonshine. Before she knew it her mentor was gone, strewn across her nest never to come back, exactly three sunrises after Flaresky became a full medicine cat.
She suspected a Northclan cat for it smelled like one but she couldn't tell which cat it was, it had a peculiar scent on it and none of the cats at the gathering smelled of it. So the mystery of Moonshine would never be solved and she would just have to live with it.
Eventually she came across the supply of dock and started picking the freshest of the leaves.
Now she had what she came for and padded over to her camp which was a large clearing with boulders that had holes in them.
She got to the clearing and was now walking into her den, Flaresky's den was a hollow boulder with an entrance and inside was a medium sized area with little pathways to four areas.
One to the far left leading to her nest, another to the left that led to the herb stock, and two other large ones to hold six cats each, one for sick ones and one for hurt ones.
She went into the herb stock and placed the dock leaves with the others she had collected before.
She smiled and left her den, she came out to the clearing she called home, as she looked around she noticed the entrance almost straight across the clearing from her, the nursery close and hidden against it, then she saw the apprentices den on the other side of the entrance, and then the warriors den right in between the nursery and elders den, and then the leaders den closely behind her, and the fresh kill pile next to the apprentices den.
When she saw the Fresh kill pile her stomach let out a loud grumble so she went over to the fresh kill pile and picked out a small thrush and ate, next she decided to see if the elders had eaten, so she picked up a large fish and a mouse and trotted over to the elders den.
"Dewflower, Blackforest, Sunmist, Jaggedtail. I brought prey," She called the elders.
"Oh good, The apprentices have been slacking off again, even if there are so many they forget about their elders," Jaggedtail said, there was a hint of annoyance in her voice as always. She was an old She-cat with a gray pelt blue eyes and a jagged tail from one of her battles.
"Thank you Flaresky," Sunmist replied gratefully in her usual sweet tone. Sunmist, new to the elders den was a sun gold She-cat with amber eyes.
"Your too kind," Dewflower meowed. in her creaking voice. Dewflower was another old She-cat that had a pale brown pelt and green eyes.
"Truly an honorable trait," Blackforest thanked, in his strong voice, as he said this he took the mouse while the She-cats ate the large fish. Blackforest was a pitch black tom with forest green eyes.
"You are welcome. Does anyone have fleas or ticks?"She asked.
"Oh please Flaresky, you've done enough," Sunmist said smiling as she ate her share of fish.
"Honestly, I don't mind," She urged.
"Well if that's the case I know I have fleas and Blackforest has been itching and we all have ticks," Jaggedtail meowed finishing her prey.
"All right. Blackforest, may I see the mouse?" She asked him.
Blackforest nodded and handed over the mouse, Flaresky took the mouse and peeled out the bile, and got the bile out with a stick expertly.
She gave Blackforest his mouse back and started checking the elders for ticks and fleas.
Soon she was done and on her way.
"Flaresky, when your done washing your paws would you Please! talk to the apprentices?"Jaggedtail asked.
"Of course,"She answered, Smiling as she padded over too the nearby river.
She washed her paws and went over to the apprentices den.
"Skypaw, Moonpaw, Volepaw, Cricketpaw, Goldpaw, and Orangepaw," She called the six apprentices.
Skypaw was a pure white She-paw with green eyes, Moonpaw was a silver tabby with deep yellow eyes and the sister of Skypaw, Volepaw was a simple brown tom with amber eyes, Cricketpaw was a small tom with a pale brown pelt and amber eyes a brother of Volepaw, Goldpaw was a golden tom with amber eyes another brother of Volepaw and Cricketpaw, and then Orangepaw a lone kit was a She-paw who was orange with Bluish gray splashes all over her and a bluish gray face with white paws belly and tail tip with algae green eyes.
"I want to know why you haven't been taking care of the elders," Flaresky asked calmly.
"Our mentors never told us to," Volepaw said rolling his eyes.
"You should feed them anyway, its the warrior code, you cant eat until they and the queens have been fed yet all of you! You go off and eat without feeding them!" She scolded.
"Were sorry," Cricketpaw muttered his apology, she knew he was soft and scared, and she knew he meant it.
"Just don't do it again," Flaresky finished. She turned away and went to go get some rest in her den, but before she left she noticed Volepaw roll his eyes.
She soon fell to sleep and did it peacefully in her den.
i would do more but i gotta go peace! :)
