Kay…..
if it bugs you that some characters may not be them selves due to the
fact that I don't know them well enough yet…this will change
later so don't worry.
Please give honest reviews for it will influence later story greatly. Your input is important to me as a first time writer here at the forums.
Sorry for my inexperience---T.T please enjoy anyways.
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-------Deeper cuts caused by your hands ------- (Sasuke/Sakura)
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"OOPPSS…………………..SASSUUKKKEEE!"
"ARRRRRGH" yelled Sasuke through a large amount of threes, "I HAVE HAD
ItTT WIIthhH YOU SA-KUr-AA!" Suddenly a smashing sound rang through out the woods.
Naruto and Kakashi where walking to meet up with the two other ninja from team 7 as the loud argument rose from the hill.
Sasuke came out of the bushes looking like a thousand trees had used him for a mop. Numerous cuts lined his arms and blood was dripping from his forehead.
At least it looked like he was unfazed but Naruto could feel flames come off Sasuke's shoulder when he tried to stop his friend. BURN (sizzle sizzle) "YOOOCH!" Naruto yanked his hand back.
Kakashi was more concerned about the other guy.
"If that what Sasuke looks like ----," an image of a dead Ochimaru and a celebrating chibi Sasuke with a joining chibi him popped into Kakashi head completely forgetting about Sakura, until he heard her voice.
"OOH sorry Sasuke! Sasuke!" Sakura yelled from high up on a cliff.
Kakashi looked up at Sakura.
"Kakashi sensei? We should go check on Sakura don't you—," Naruto let his chin
hit the floor when he saw a very discrete (POFF)indicating his sensei's absences.
Naruto glared up at his sensei on the top of the cliff already consoling Sakura, and then started running….
"I asked him… out he said…..yes…so I got supper exited and I….I," Sakara started crying.
"You what Sakara……its okay you can tell me," Kakashi said as a tired Naruto came running up them looking like a lazy bum would after running 34 k…..
"I accidentally pushed him off the cliff…..!" Sakura screamed. Kakashi said nothing hiding a laugh but Naruto beat him to it.
Naruto fell over laughing … until he called down the fist from hell!
"OOOOOCH" all the birds flew away from the hilariously deserved furry.
Now Kakashi was glad he hid that laugh.
"NARUTO !……………" Sakura's voice was fallowed by 100+ punching noises
Sasuke leaned against the icy steel door he had just closed behind him. It had been cooled with the night air.
"OOH YAH ---- one measly date wont hurt-yha- uh huh…. maybe she'll shut up after this - yup," he repeated his thoughts. He sounded so calm it was scary.
(Long silence)
"N-NOT!" Sasuke snapped at the odd feelings he had for Sakura. Only a second later he felt a strange drain. It made all of his mussels constrict and give way a little. It was just enough to make him roll his shoulders into his face. The warmth of the position on his face helped, for about 2 seconds. The room started spinning. Sasuke fought his way to the side of his bed. Sasuke tried to walk straight and succeeded to a point. He looked like he was walking normal, but he couldn't figure out why he needed to bother.
Finally he gave up and fell forwards. Before the falling sensation had a chance to turn into the soft, familiar comfort of the sheets and bounce of his bed, he was asleep.
His head was nowhere near the pillow and his feet hung of the edge.
For some reason the falling sensation fallowed him and he couldn't wake up.
Sasuke soon realized he wasn't asleep. He just couldn't move….. at all, he tried everything.
Why can't I move! Am I dead?--- DamN! I didn't think I had lost that much blood he told himself.
OUT of nowhere he felt a pain that severed the flesh near his neck. The cold metal was removed in time for some thing cold and wet to wrap around his neck.
(………) ---!
One quick squeeze and blackness of the night left Sasuke far in its depths.
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Meanwhile at Naruto's hou---------I mean--------rats nest……
"Gota find scroll of my own ……..OWCH" a bunch of dirty dishes fell on his head.
He felt each dish break into 5 separate pieces atop his thick head and roll painfully down his shoulders. And oddly enough the 8 plates, 2 cups, 7 bowls and 1 glass casserole pot didn't knock him out.
(3 seconds later)
A spoon fell delicately on top the goose egg, throbbing on top of his skull and that one did it…….TIMBER! He fell flat on his face, ass high in the air.
(Spoon looks remarkable like Naruto gets up and starts dancing around on Naruto's head yelling in an annoying high pitch voice "deadly spoon of death, deadly spoon of death. I knocked it out! I knocked it out…. yah I'm the greatest! The village hidden in the fridge is safe once again," then tuned back into a normal spoon again and fell off)
Naruto got up after about 5 minutes and looked at his house. His jaw fell open.
"Its soooooo it ……I wwhhhat all my ……….its so AHHhhh! Wahhh all ……I wwhhhat all my ……….its so clean! Wahhh all my hard woorkk!"
At Sakura's house everything was normal. Sakura lie curled up next to her favorite book, asleep. Another book lie next to her that she had been reading. The air came in through the window wiping her pink, shiny hair around her sleeping face. It also flipped around the pages of the second book finally landing on the smooth middle page.
It was a picture of a small unseen demon tormenting her two team mates. The strange book flickered, the changed into a fantasy, romance novel.
ZZzzZZZzz
(Morning)
Sasuke winced. He could feel a swishing sensation around his body. His eyes flew open and immediately fogy water shot through them.
MY WHOLE DAMN HOUSE IS FLOODED! The salt water stung his still bleeding wounds. He swam to the window and started banging on it but it wouldn't break.
The room was cloudy and loose leaf paper floated in his way. Desperately he swatted the various papers, books, pens, scrolls and clothing as he swam down to a trap door next to his closet.
………. Knew this would come in handy just before he opened the trap door something squeezed Sasuke's neck.
As you all know he isn't an idiot. Sasuke realized it for the decoy it was. As he slid through the trap door paying a close attention to thing around his neck just in case. Climbing down the hole in his floor Sasuke skillfully used his movements to push himself down the tunnel.
He kicked the over sized bamboo ventilation plate out of his way and swam desperately to the kitchen. The door to his house was only 2 rooms over now.
(SQqqUUuuwwwEEeeeZZZeeee) Susske's face twisted into an expression of pain and determination. His world once again began to blur when….
2 knocks on the steel front door echoed through the water. The squeezing stopped.
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"Sasuke I'm sorry about yesterday…. Can you forgive me?" Sakura asked. She went to knock on the door again when she heard the sound of water swishing around. Sakura stood straight up and took a steep away from the door yelling.
"SASUKE?" she suddenly jumped forwards and pried at the door with an image of Sasuke drowning himself no he wouldn't do that – he doesn't hate me that much still even reassured that wasn't it she knew that something was wrong.
((chibi Sasuke "finally did you come up with that by yourself…damn the person writing this is messed up—now ALL OF YOU ….quit sitting around and letting me drowned DAMN IT ……..SAVE Meeee…save me ))
Sakura busted down the door with a kick that tensed her all her leg muscles. She poked her head into the living room and the kitchen. Sakura then heard a small groan from the next room over and found Sasuke lying on his back. A strange seal written on his neck…. The only thing wet was the slightly conscious Sasuke warning her of an unseen adversary. His wounds were salt burned and leaking clear slime.
"KAKASHI SENSAI!" yelled Sakura.
(chibi Sasuke is kneeling down chibily crying, "thank you Sakura"--then he gets up and starts pulling a chibi Naruto's hair while stepping on his head yelling " and just where the hell are you!" )
Kakashi was taking Naruto to the hospital with the same curse mark the letters where clearly legibly spelling the name ….
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Itachi was sitting comfortable listening to the demon that chattered in his ear. Suddenly yet as calmly as ever Itachi threw the demon across the room full of bills and unpaid rent notices.
" YOU Failed to ASSASSANAITE HIM……" he stood up," you have until that useless girl finishes reading your demon book or I will burn you alive you annoying little worm!"
the demon faded of with a scared look at Itachi.
I wonder what might be a more fitting punishment for when it fails? he got a mental picture of the demon paying all his bills and then slowly cutting him into a million peaces or making him pay the rent and burning him alive.
------sorry now but I've gotta go now…. And okay I know……….I probably got Itachi's personality all wrong but I've only read so far into the series, but one of my friends told me about him….I thought it would be good to through Sasuke's bro into the mix….and please review-even though you probably heard this a thousand times and been hounded for a review by every body else, be kind and take 2 minutes to give me an honest one. --------
-----That's it guys……sorry but its time for me to run out of ideas….. (T.T)
anyway the next chapther will come soon so "next time" and please remember your opinion is important-----
Oh and do tell me how you liked my first fan--- you've all heard this a thousand times haven't you……? Oh well
Beta'd by Lynxie
