Hello everyone, this is the first chapter of my new story, 'Obsidian war'. It's a bit like my twilight story. I use Hogwarts and Dumbledore and the character of Severus Snape, a bit. The whole story has nothing to do with the story of the originally harry potter story XD, except maybe Voldemort XD.
Chapter 1: A train to another world
A small girl with blond hair walked through King's cross train station. She was wearing a pink and white striped dress and pink ballerina's. She had a pink trunk in her hand and was carrying it like it was not very heavy, but it was very heavy. She was smiling and whistling. She was all alone.
Slowly she walked to a wall between platform 9 and 10, gave a quick glance around and disappeared through it. When she was at the other side, she saw a sign with platform 9 ¾ on it. A big train was waiting at the platform, the Hogwarts express. She nodded and boarded the train without a second thought.
She searched for an empty compartment. She found one in the back of the train. It didn't stay empty for long. A big, brown haired girl entered the compartment only seconds later.
"Ow, sorry, I didn't know somebody was in, do you mind if I and my friends come stay here too?"
The girl shook her head.
"You must be a first year. I am the Hufflepuff prefect, Julia Moon, nice to meet you."
The girl nodded.
"Yes, I am a first year. I am Minchy Volamo, nice to meet you too."
They shook hands. Just then, three other girls entered, chattering loudly. Julia told Minchy their names, a girl with a dark skin and long black hair was Mandy Maxes, a girl with long blond hair and twinkling blue eyes was Emily Tarrow and a smaller girl with a narrow face and many pimples was Jessica Itticks, the only fourth year in their group of friends.
When the train came closer to its destination, the girls started to change, one by one. First Julia, then Mandy, Emily and finally Jessica. Minchy didn't change into her school uniform, though, until the train stopped. Jessica was looking at her, frowning.
"Minchy, you have to change into your uniform, that's a school rule."
Minchy smiled at her and went into a bathroom, only to come out a few seconds later in a school uniform. She was bouncing up and down. Mandy rolled her eyes.
"You have too much energy Minchy!"
Nobody saw her winking at the snarky potions teacher, professor Meldown.
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The professors were staring at the first years. Professor Dumbledore sighed.
"All those new students, full of energy."
The DADA teacher, professor Mulks, frowned.
"Too much energy if you ask me, look at that blond one there, she is just bouncing with energy!"
Professor Meldown snorted.
"They all have too much energy, they are all brats."
Professor Sprout arched her brows.
"One of them is your niece, isn't that right? Then why do you call her a brat too?"
Professor Meldown snorted again.
"Yes, she is a brat too."
Professor Sprout glared at him.
"Who is she actually? I know it's one of the first years, but who?"
Professor Meldown glared at her.
"I won't tell you, only the headmaster knows, that is bad enough!"
With that he walked away. Professor Dumbledore's eyes were twinkling. He was probably the only one who saw Minchy's wink.
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The first years safely arrived at the castle, although not without a bit of trouble. The boat with Minchy in it almost turned around, because of her bouncing. Someone's magic had kept the boat straight and the students inside, but they all got a shock out of it. Those first years were now glaring at Minchy, but it didn't bother her.
After they had entered the school, professor McGonagall explained everything about the sorting. She gave everyone a strict look. This also didn't bother Minchy. Then they entered the great hall.
All students were looking at them. Julia put up her thumbs to Minchy when she saw her. Minchy gave her a big smile back. The sorting hat was waiting for them. The first was called forward by professor McGonagall.
"Andrewson, Mattew!"
After a few seconds the hat yelled.
"Ravenclaw!"
The next was called forward quickly.
"Bilboard, Mariella!"
This time, the hat took its time.
"Hufflepuff!"
This went on until it was a twins' turn.
"Ofeir, Stella!"
A tall girl with blond hair and a bit of round face climbed up the chair. It took almost a minute before the hat yelled.
"Gryffindor!"
The girl jumped of the chair and ran toward the Gryffindor table. They clapped loud.
Then the second twin was called.
"Ofeir, Wella!"
She walked up to the chair with the grace of a Slytherin. It didn't take long for the hat to yell.
"Slytherin!"
With the same grace as before she walked up to her table.
Nothing special happened until professor McGonagall called out her name.
"Volamo, Minchy!"
Minchy yelled with happiness and ran toward the had, grabbed and kept bouncing on the chair, until the hat yelled.
"Hufflepuff!"
She bounced even when she had found a place to sit, next to Jessica, who was still frowning at her energy. Food didn't appear until after the last girl (Yamino, Cora) was placed in Ravenclaw. Dumbledore gave his speech as usual and finally they could eat. Minchy didn't get much food and at this Jessica frowned too. Even Julia got a worried look.
"Minchy, congratulations for getting into Hufflepuff. I hope you like it here. Are you sure you are comfortable here? You're eating not enough!"
Minchy nodded.
"I don't need much food."
At this even Julia frowned.
"Are you sure? You are using a lot of energy…"
Minchy nodded again.
"I'm sure yes."
When the meal was done, Dumbledore had a speech once more. Julia led the Hufflepuff first years to their common room. She even held a speech of her own.
"Welcome, girls and boys, welcome for yet another year, or for the first time. I hope you all will be friendly toward each other and help each other when needed. Watch out for the Slytherins, they like to prank us. Go get some sleep and enjoy your year here."
With that they all went to bed, except one girl, who stayed in the common room, Minchy. Julia saw this and frowned. She gestured her classmates to go ahead and walked back.
"Don't you have to get to bed, Minchy?"
Minchy shook her head.
"I don't need much sleep."
She smiled. Julia left her there, but thought it was very strange. That night she had a strange dream about a girl in pink and white, but forgot it when she woke up.
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Katjeschatje
