Well as they say "3rd times the charm" and after 2 (Yes 2) disastrous stories that failed epically I decided to review where I went wrong and read other fanfics like MAD. I spent all this time reading from the minds of Artful Lounger (THE BEST AUTHOR EVAHHH. READ HIS STORIES, ESPECIALLY KAGE NO NARUTO) Freedom Guard (Best and Hottest Lemons alive) and Inazuka pau (love the Toradora fic about Ryuuji being a badass) and revamped my style of writing. Hope its up to standards.

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NOTE: This story will follow the game with a few edits to the original story to accommodate my OC but I will be faithful and include the ever famous "Quests" of the game except this time the story is weaved through making it at least interesting instead of randomly beating the crap out of monsters for GRADE

NOW ON WITH THE SHOW!!!!!

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"Wake up..."

"Your world, Terresia, is dying..."

"Wake up!..."

"Wake up...please..."

"Your world needs you!"

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Slowly but surely the girl opened her eyes revealing their brilliant emerald color. Shakily, she began her first movements since her "birth", flexing her arms and moving her fingers as her life force began beating anew. Almost immediately she stumbled out of the cocoon of flower petals and landed on her knees, managing to throw her arms forward to stop her face from hitting the soft mossy floor, small thread-like substances still clinging to her like a newborn butterfly. She opened her mouth and gasped for air as her lungs began functioning and after a few seconds of heavy breathes, her heart's beat became rhythmic and smooth. Still, like the newborn she is, she began standing upright, letting her mind take in the surrounding area. Her brain which was fully matured began processing the new information. She was in a medium sized cavern, moss, roots and overgrown plants crawled around the walls, floors and even the ceiling. Looking back she stared at the great big flower which bore her, by which means mystified her. Taking a few steps forward, a small gust of wind blew through and caressed her soft pink skin. Involuntarily she shuddered and realized she was bare of any clothes. Looking around she saw a rag-like cloak in the mess of petals and immediately threw it upon herself without even wondering how it got there.

"So you've finally answered my call"

Startled, she turned around so fast and wound up a heap on the leaves on the floor. Standing back up and pulling back the cloak which had fallen over her, she looked around for the source of the voice.

"I'm down here" it called out

Looking down, her gaze was met with the weirdest looking creature in her life. It sat there eyeing her with great interest, with its round head and cat shaped eyes and ears. Its head was a bit bigger than its body and its had 4 spindly legs that didn't even look like they could support the creature. Then what surprised her even more was when the thing suddenly stood up and flew towards her.

"So she is this world first Descender. All in all not a bad figure. Golden hair, a perfect body, not too muscled but not too thin either"

"Here" the little creature said, flying behind a few roots and pulling out (albeit with some difficulty) a pair of ragged sandals and bringing it to her. "We can't have you tripping around these parts, with monsters here and there. But since you are a descender, the denizens of the world tree will not attack you unless enraged or provoked"

He then turned around and began flying towards the entrance of the cavern, his two little wings on his tail flapping around quickly.

"Wa- Wait. Please" She called out, her sweet angelic voice cutting through the silence. "Who are you?"

The creature immediately stopped in mid-flight and looked at the girl with an expression of surprise. But realization hit him harder and he chuckled a bit at his forgetfulness.

"Of course, she's still a 'Newborn', she doesn't know anything of this worlds danger yet." the little creature thought

"My name is Mormo" he introduced "I'm the one who called out to you when you finally woke up. Just like you I'm a Descender, but from another world"

"Another world!?" the girl asked, surprised at the new info

"Yeah, but enough about me wha-"

Before he could continue any further a high pitched scream sailed down the open entrance and abruptly stopped them.

"Damn, it sound like somebody is already in trouble and you aren't even 15 minutes old! Quick, follow me and let's check out what's what" with that both of them quickly made their way out of the cavern and towards the trouble ahead

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"No, please! Let go of me!" came a voice, obviously female

"Heh, No way! this is the way we treat spies! I'm going to have some fun with you before I kill you and leave your corpse to the beasts!" came a second voice, this time male

"NO, DON'T PLEASE!!!!!" came the first voice

In a shadows of the roots on the ceiling, Mormo quickly assessed what was going on. A young girl around 16 was sprawled on the floor, her pink hair disheveled and her clothes ripped here and there. A man wearing armor stood over her as she cried out, obviously wallowing in her despair. Making sure he wasn't seen he flew towards one of the many opening of the room where he had told the newborn descender to wait and hide.

"Okay, we need to the help that girl before that bastard does any more damage to her integrity" he whispered.

The Girl stared at Mormo with a look of shock and quickly replied "But he has an axe! And I don't even know how to fight!"

"Don't worry about that" Mormo said, looking around for a solution, his eyes spying a glint of silver behind the girl "Hey what's that?" he wondered out loud, flying closer to the object.

Tangled in the undergrowth was and old rusty looking dagger. Mormo quickly pointed it out and the girl pulled it out with some difficulty. Holding it in her hand, she suddenly began twirling the dagger around her fingers with such precision that she didn't even cut herself. She stood up and began slicing the air with a few quick swipes and jabs combining it with some fancy hand work and twists and looking like a ballet of blades and death. When she brought the blade down to her side. All the leaves on the branches suddenly fell down and split in half. Taking a breather she looked at her handiwork and the knife she held in her hand.

"How did I-"

"No time" Mormo suddenly cut through "That guy is about to kill her! Quick get out there now!"

Without wasting a moments thought, she jumped out of her hiding place and saw the man about to bring the axe down on the helpless girl. Suddenly all her instincts kicked into overdrive and it seemed like time slowed down as the man brought down the axe. She ran at him so fast and without thinking straight rammed him. From Mormo's view he had just been looking at the newest Descender a second ago and in the blink of an eye she had closed the gap and sent the armored thug into the wall.

"She's fast!" Mormo thought "and she did THAT out of pure instinct!? If she trained herself she'd actually be a really deadly fighter!"

The pink haired girl stood up shakily and walked to her saviour. As she neared she tripped and was about to fall down again but was caught by the mysterious blonde who just came out of nowhere and sent her aggressor right through a wall.

"Are you okay?" The blonde asked

The pink haired girl looked stunned at first but after standing up she quickly replied "I'm fine, Thank you very much for saving me from him ummm, Ms-?"

The blonde suddenly paused and looked quite confused "Uh, ummm I-I...."

Suddenly her head's gears clicked together and her name flew straight to her mouth "Laena. My name is Laena"

"Thank you Laena-san" the girl replied, bowing slightly "My name is Kanono Earheart"(Tell me if I misspelled)

"At least I finally have something to call you by" came Mormo's voice as he flew casually towards them, another rag-cloak with him. Instantly Kanono screamed "Monster!" In surprise but calmed down immediately after Laena grabbed her by the shoulder and shook her out of her shock. After her little episode Laena took the ragged cloak from Mormo and tossed it to Kanono.

"You better cover yourself, your clothes are pretty badly damaged" She stated. Looking at herself Kanono just realized that her clothes were torn here and there exposing ample skin where bruise marks and small cuts could be seen. In her embarrassment she quickly threw the cloth around her and bowed her head to hide the bright red tomato blush that adorned her face. Laena saw this and laughed a bit

"Don't be embarrassed! We are both girls you know" she said quickly, giving a smile that almost made Kanono melt.

"Well now that that's over" Mormo began "We need to get out of here before-"

CRASH!

"-that oaf gets out"

The thug busted out of the ruble, his armor having taken the most of the damage. Staring around he saw the blonde girl who dared interrupt his fun and picked up his axe.

"YOU LITTLE BITCH!!" he screamed running at them and, once he closed the gap fairly quickly, which caught them off guard and took a swing at both of them.

Laena, whose senses were still heightened quickly pushed Mormo and Kanono backwards and raised her knife in defense and the axe collided on its rusty surface. A cracking sound rang out and the knife broke under the strain. Instinctively she bent her head back to avoid the blade that would hit her but she wasn't able to react quickly enough and the axes' tip nicked her left eye.

"AHHH!!!!!!!" She screamed in pain clutching her face as blood began flowing out. When her hand felt the warm liquid she knew half her sight was no more.

"LAENA!!!" Kanono yelled out, shocked at the sudden turn of event. Even Mormo cursed under his breath at being to slow to realize that they weren't out of the woods yet.

"Ha! You like that bitch!?" The thug called out, pointing his axe tauntingly. "Now that I've rendered you weaponless I'm going to kill you and then finish what I started!"

As the thug laughed at his opponents weakness, little did he know that his little move started a chain reaction inside Laena's own body. As anger welled up inside her, energy began coursing through her blood stream. Inside a blue flame erupted and surrounded her heart and began fueling her body with a newer energy. Once again moving by instinct, Laena raised her free hand and cocked her arm backwards.

"Oh, is the little bitch still going to fight?" The thug said in a sing-song voice "Well prepare to die!"

With that, he ran again towards Laena, not noticing the blue aura surrounding her free hand. Without thinking again Laena swung her arm and the as the blue energy formed a small sized bomb, complete with the signature skull and crossbones, and let it fly towards the thug.

"BOMB THROW!!!"

The thug didn't even have time to think as the black ball of death collided with him and exploded with enough force to send him smashing back onto the wall.

"Did that finish him off?" Laena thought, gasping in pain as her eye continued to bleed "No, it hit his armor and just blew him away and I don't even know what I just did a second ago!"

"Heh, I'll admit that that caught me by surprise back there" the thug said standing up, his helmet blown off revealing a very ugly muscled face "But I won't fall for that again!" he called out raising his axe.

Just as he raised his axe, an arrow flew out of nowhere and pierced him right between the eyes. In that micro second, as the cold steel touched his skin, he knew he was dead but it wasn't over as a bolt of lightning descended out of nowhere and hit his head causing it to explode like a watermelon. As flesh and brain matter scattered, Kanono gave the highest pitched scream she could muster and Laena immediately turned around to look for the source of the attack.

A blue haired youth stood in front of the corridor behind them, tucking his bow behind him and running up to them.

"Kanono!" he called out grasping her and looking at her with concern "Are you hurt? Did that guy do anything horrible to you?"

"Please Chester, I'm fine" Kanono said breaking free of Chester's grasp "But Laena here saved me, right Laena?"

"Laena?"

She turned around and found Laena on the ground passed out from some blood loss while Mormo was using some cloth he ripped from her cloak and frantically using it to try and stop the bleeding

"KANONO HELP!!" Mormo cried out

"LAENA!!!"

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"Is she alright?"

"I've managed to heal her wounds but her eye is beyond my power"

"So she'll be like this permanently"

"I'm afraid so"

"Oh, Laena, I'm so sorry"

"Is that Kanono?" Laena thought, her thoughts finally stirring from slumber "Where am I? Sure doesn't feel like the world tree"

As her hand began moving, she felt the linen sheets under her and summarized that she was on a bed. Where though was completely out of the question since her body seemed to refuse to wake up completely

"Hey she's waking up!"

"Wait" Laena suddenly thought "That definitely isn't Kanono"

"Call Kratos! Maybe he can help Raine now!"

"Neither is that Kanono" Laena thought, her body beginning to move to her commands. As she opened her eyes, her vision blurred as her eye, the remaining one, took in the light of the surroundings.

"Wait! Why can't I open my other eye!?" Laena suddenly thought, completely forgetting the events that had just happened. As she turned her head, her blurry vision saw a silhouette tower over her menacingly. Her eyes were still adjusting but she could make out a sword at his side.

Then it happened.

All the memories of the fight, the thug, the axe, Mormo, Kanono, that blue haired guy, and her losing her eye and fainting on the spot. All of it came back to her. Her battle senses suddenly kicking in again she immediately threw her hand forward for the sword and, in the blink of an eye, unsheathed it from the mysterious man and jumped up out of bed, distancing her legs as she landed and throwing the sword into her hand into a backhand defensive grasp across her.

"STAY BACK!" she yelled as her eyes finally adjusted and focused themselves.

"Laena! Please wait, we're not going to hurt you!" came a familiar voice. Looking quickly but not letting down her stance she assessed where she was and saw that she was in a medium sized bedroom made out of wood. Here and there roots stemmed out from small cracks and, judging by the flowering greenery, came to a conclusion that wherever she was was near the world tree. There were 3 people in the room, Kanono, A gruff looking male with brown hair who she assumed was Kratos who looked somewhere in his 30's and whose sword she just hijacked and a white haired woman with a bright orange dress with a staff in hand. She immediately loosened up when she sensed no danger from the two others.

"Sorry" she said as she tossed the sword back to its owner, who just grunted in reply and sheathed the long steel blade and turned around, not before she noticed a slight red blush across his face

"Is something wrong?"

"Ummm, Laena" Kanono began, her face also bright red "You see-"

Suddenly the door banged open and three more people suddenly burst in

"We heard something fall and crash!" said the first, a red haired boy with another sword and weirdly shaped gauntlets who was followed by the blue haired man with a ponytail and a white haired kid holding some kind of toy. When the three of them looked at Laena, each one turned red and the kid actually fainted, the two others were left with their mouths wide open.

"What's wrong with you people?" She asked again, annoyed at everyone's reaction towards her as she placed her hand on her hip in exasperation. Wait. Her hip? Looking back at the bed she noticed a white blanket on it and looking at a mirror in the room near the dresser, she saw herself stark naked in all her glory. Her eyes suddenly snapped to the men in the room as she suddenly teared up and glared at them.

The red head suddenly sensing danger from the blonde started to edge away but not in time "Wait, we didn't strip you!"

Wrong choice of words

"YOU DIRTY PERVERTS!!!!!!!!!!!"

SLAP

Yes. Not even Kratos was spared the fate.

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So what do you guys think? A bit too fast for you maybe? PM me if you have any questions and don't forget to leave a comment AND NO FLAMES, FLAMES WILL BE DOUSED WITH WATER AND THROWN INTO THE DEVOURER'S MOUTH FOR LORD WIDDERSHIN. ALL HAIL LORD WIDDLES!!!!!!

Oh and poll on who Laena is going to be partnered with (Romantically, duh)

Kratos ("More than" student-mentor style relation)

Reid (I don't know how she will cope with him)

Genis (You sick pedophilic bastard)

Lloyd (FORGIVE ME COLLETE)

Stahn (Rise from your grave!)

Leon (Chocolate!!!!)

Gar (*All the girls swoon and fall)

Eugene (oh god you sick monster!)

AND OF COURSE

KANONO (PLEASE PICK PLEASE PICK PLEASE PICK) (I love a good lesbi fanfic)

Unless someone wants to actually add Mormo to the roster (*regurgitates lunch)

Well Hope you enjoyed reading! If I'm in a good mood, I'll include a little bonus omake in the next update.

-aurion123