(Hey you guys! This is my first actual fanfiction, with plots and all that jazz. I'd love it if you guys could review, and give me any kinds of tips on writing. Hope you enjoy the story.)
Welcome to the Hive
Ch.1: Capture
Sarah was running through the corridors of Mount Pillar, looking around for Wamma. 'Cmon Wamma, where are you?' She thought to herself as shecontinued looking around for her danian companion. She suddenly felt a sharp pain in her shoulder and silently cursed out, looking at her arm as she saw it was a sleep sting. "I hate it when….this..ha..ppens…" She stuttered out, before collapsing onto the ground. Shortly after, a small squad of four basic mandiblors came, two picking her up and dragging her by the arms, their leader looked at the two of them. "Hurry up! The infectionists want her ready by today!" the leader of them yelled at the two mandiblors who he was commanding.
Sarah woke up, and tried to move her arm to her head, but quickly found that couldn't budge an inch. She looked, and saw that her arms and legs were encased in stone, which attached themselves to stalagmites and stalactites, hanging her in the air. The small cavern she was in only had two entrances, one from the left, and one from the right of the cavern, and she was on the wall that was farthest from the two entrances. "Great, I can't move, I can't feel my scanner in my pocket, and I'm running out of time." She said to herself. She now heard footsteps, and saw a new Danian come in. "Wamma!" She yelled out in excitement. Wamma was a large danian, with a big, round belly. His overall carapace was red, save for the gold that rimmed his shoulder plates, collar, and wrists. His head was orange, paired with small mandibles, his antennae were gray, and his eyes are a solid blue. Unlike many of the mandiblors, he stood on two legs, and four paired of arms, ending in three clawed fingers along with a clawed thumb. He was now wearing a sash made from metallic emblems of the danian tribe. "Thank the Cothica you're here! You can help me get out of here!" Sarah yelled at Wamma, looking at him with hopeful eyes. Wamma only gave her a somber look, and merely stood there. Sarah gave Wamma a confused and annoyed look. "Why are you just standing there?! Help me get out of this thing!" She yelled at Wamma, struggling to get out again.
"He can't help you. He's been forbidden to do so." Another voice said that was coming into the room, another bipedal danian had walked into the room. His carapace was a pale green color, while his eyes are red. He had a very powerful frame, his secondary set of arms baring powerful looking blades, and a set of two red scythe like blades came out of his back. He sported a set of fangs rather than mandibles, and had two fin like structures coming from the sides of his head. "Odu-Bathax? What are you doing here?!" Sarah yelled out. "I'm here to make sure Wamma doesn't get any ideas before we start the experiment. " Odu said as he looked at Wamma, who didn't respond and refused to meet his gaze. "Our spies have discovered the friendship that you two have together, and knew that it would interfere with our plans. So, here I am, and there you are." Odu said, finishing up his explanation. "Experiment? What experiment?" Sarah asked, looking at the intimidating battlemaster.
Odu managed what looked to be a grin, as he looked up at the Chaotic "Your assimilation."
(And there we have it. The first chapter of my first serious fanfic. I hope you you guys enjoyed what I have given you. And I'll probably update this story later today.)
