Hello! This is my first fanfic, so all supportive criticism is welcome and appreciated! If you want this story to continue let me know in the comments please. Also other chapters won't be this short.
3rd person limited to El
It was pitch black, like when El usually came here, but it wasn't a bad kind of darkness. To her, it was her place. If she needed some time to herself, she would come here.
However, this time the darkness wasn't hers. She hadn't chosen to come to the void. She looked around, trying to figure out what brought her here. Off in the distance she saw two figures talking to each other, one facing away from her. She walked towards them, hoping to understand why she was here. When she got close enough to hear them, she was surprised by what was happening.
"Here you are, as promised." The one facing away from her said, with an unpleasant familiarity in his voice. He handed the other a folder. El moved closer to see what was in the folder, and saw that the one who was given it was about her age, but there was something interesting about him. He had a big black circle of cloth on his eye that was held on by a strap that wrapped around his head (An eyepatch, but she doesn't know that's what it's called). She had seen it before, and wondered if this fellow was a pirate. She then turned her attention to the folder, now opened. Inside she saw writing too small to read quickly, beside several pictures of… Daddy? Why would they want pictures of Daddy?
"What do you want in return for this?" The one with the eyepatch asked.
"His daughter."
Eleven was shocked. Who was this person, and why would they want her? She looked at his face, and almost died of fear. Standing before her was the one man she had ever feared. Papa.
Eleven woke up screaming. Hopper rushed into the room, saying, "Kid! What's wrong?"
"I-I saw papa."
Hopper's eyes widened with fear. "That man is dead." Hopper said, trying to comfort her. "He-he can't hurt you." He said, trying to convince himself al much as Eleven.
"O-ok."
They stayed there, hugging for quite some time before eleven fell asleep, this time to a pleasant dream about her and mike getting ice cream, and hopper tucked her in.
"Nighty-night, kiddo."
