His Evil Twin

This story is based on my fave book "Her Evil Twin." This one has a bigger twist. This time, it will be two times scary and suspenseful.

Note: Not all of my written stories are based from the book. Some are made up.

Enjoy reading!

Chapter One: The Beginning

In class, Zick is getting all bored and tired about their teacher babbling about Math lessons, which Zick, and sometimes, his classmates, fail frequently. Zick was looking to the window and wondering up if there are any enemies to face him or his family and friends.

Until the note came and said:

Zick, meet me and my friends at the river under Old Mill Restaurant.

Be there at exactly 10:00 pm.

Bring 5 candles, a box of chalk, and a glass (not plastic).

Don't be late!

Zick looked around the class and no body, not even his friend Elena. Zick was wondering why a person would send him that kind of letter.

At recess...

(Zick let Teddy see his letter)

Zick: So, what do you think? You think I must go?

Teddy: Zick, you can't just go there. There could be any danger you need to face on. It might be a gorka or something. You shouldn't come.

Zick: What do you mean I shouldn't come? I mean, come on. It's just an invitation.

Teddy: Yeah, but you can't be so sure. It could be a stupid freakin' trick.

Zick: Man, if you do know in what state I'm in, you'll think as well. Okay, can we drop the subject already?

Teddy: Yeah sure. Hey, speaking of subject, what kind of costumes we will wear? Oh, I know! What about monsters in Bibbur – Si?

Zick (sarcastically): Yeah, we'll wear those to expose monsters. And tell people that we are tamers.

Teddy: Ya think it'll work?

Zick: That's a no for me!

Teddy: Oh, what do you mean?

Zick: Aren't you listening? We're too old for those costumes! Who would wanna dance with a monster costume?

Teddy: Oops. Didn't think of that. Sorry.

Zick: Well, I'll go. What about you?

Teddy: Yeah, I'll go and check on you.

10:00 pm, at the Old Mill Restaurant under the river...

Zick: God, it's so spooky and cold out here!

Teddy: Hey, Zick!

Elena: Zick, where you guys going?

Teddy: Under the river. Why?

Elena: I don't want you guys wonder off without a warning.

At the river...

Zick: Ach! Hey, what's up with the flashlight?

(Kevin, James and Lawrence approach)

James: You must be the blue haired guy. You're Zick, no?

Zick: Yes, I'm Zick. Now, you would you point it down.

James: I see you have two friends along with you.

Kevin: Yeah, and a female scaredy cat! (laughs)

Elena: Don't call me a scaredy cat, or I will make you one.

Kevin: Yo, Jay, you said girls aren't suppose to be here.

James: It's okay. The more the merrier. Now, shall we go to the forbidden and haunted house?

Elena, Teddy and Zick: Yes.

In the haunted house...

Elena: Zick, are you sure this is a good idea? It's getting darker and scarier here.

Zick: Don't worry, we're here.

Kevin: Now it's 11:40 midnight, Zick, draw a circle. Teddy, light up the candles and Elena prepare the Ouija Board.

As they prepared the initiation, they all sat, formed a proper circle and...

James: I'm giving you a strict and proper warning, for the ones who have weak hearts, you better get out of the initiation. Now, all of us will close our eyes and say: "Spirit of glass, we call on to thee, come tell us what is to be."

All: Spirit of glass, we call on to thee, come tell us what is to be.

As the glass moves...

James: Oh, spirit, please tell us who you are.

(Glass moves to V, then I, then C, then K.)

Teddy: His name is Vick.

James: Vick, if you are here, please give us signs.

(Vick posses Zick)

(Zick groans painfully)

Elena: Zick, you alright?

Zick: Elena, he possessed me.

Teddy: Hang in there Zick! What did you guys do to him?

James: Be quiet, Teddy.

(Zick's eyes turned red)

Vick: I'm Vick. Who asked me to be here?

James: It is me.

Vick: How dare you called me! I 'm already resting in peace! And since you called on to me, the body I possessed right now will suffer and will get the blames!

Elena: Zick, snap out of it!

Vick: Get out of my way!

(Begins to quarrel the three boys and left them battered, the boys ran away from the haunted house)

(Begins to bang Zick's head hardly at the wall)

Teddy: Zick! Oh, my God! Zick! Stop it!

Elena: There's no use of stopping him!

(Vick left Zick's body battered)

Teddy: Zick? Zick! Wake up!

Elena: Zick? Zick! Are you there? Teddy, we gotta take him home!

It went all black...

Teddy: You said it. I'll carry him, you carry the bags.

Elena: Okay.

As they take Zick home, he is still unconscious and clueless of what happened at dawn. He might not know what will happened to him next since he was included in the initiation of Vick's spirit. One thing he doesn't know, he will take all the blame in his life.

Well, here's chapter one! Wait for chapter two to come! Peace out, Monster Allergy lovers and fans!