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"Do you regret it?"
Robin turn his head around to see the goddess better.
"I don't know what to fell right now" he said while lathing." I mean, I would do the same no meter how many times I needed, but I can't get over the feeling there should have been another way, another option, and when I think about it I get the feeling I failed then. Do you understand what I mean, Naga."
It had been almost a year since Robin chose to sacrifice himself to destroy Grima once and for all. During the whole time Naga had never talked to him not even when he got to that strange place that looked like he above the clouds. He was even sitting on a cloud at that very instant while looking to the ground way under his current place of rest.
"son of Grima why do you think that you still have not returned to the place where your loved ones are?"Naga said with a gentle voice while approaching whim and putting a hand on his shoulder.
"I have been thinking about it for almost all the time I was here."he answered with a sad and tired voice."first I thought that it took time for the feel blood to disappear than an idea came to me and it frighten me every-time it come back. What if our bonds weren't strong enough as I thought it were? What if for then it doesn't mater if I never come back? And even though I'm sure it's not it, the proof of the opposite it's right in front of me. I'm still dead and there is nothing that show me wrong of this fact. So I … Really don't know what to think"
"so you curse your destiny, your friends and your choice son of Grima?"
"As I said before I regret nothing, because even if my bonds with them meant nothing to them to me they are the only thing stooping me from jumping right now." he answered with a smile and tears coming down his face" the memory of my days training with Chrom, having tea with Lissa,Virion and Maribelle, fighting with Vaike, Lon'qu and Gregor to see who was the strongest, riding horse with Stahl and Sully witch every time ended with a race back to camp, studding new spells with Miriel, Ricken and Tharja, playing all day with Nowi and Herry, hunting with Panne and Donnel on the middle of the woods, helping Sumia and Cherche taking care of each one mounts, searching for candy with Gaius, whom always keep all the profit for himself, helping villages by giving them food with Libra and helping raise their spirits with Olivia by trowing a party, or of my long talks with Cordelia, which was always my most precious bond, is what make me still have hope of returning to their side."
"That was a good answer son of Grima"
Robin felt a hand being placed on his head and suddenly he could only see darkness around him. He than felt that he was lying on the ground.
"Chrom, we have to do SOMETHING."
When he heard those five words, before he could even open his eyes, he was already crying.
I'm thinking about writing about what happen next, so if you like the idea please say and thank you for reading.