Hey, I'm Mystic Sky. Formerly known as Mysterious Guest (reviewer), I FINALLY got an account. Anyways, this is my first Metal Fight Beyblade story, so please. No flames. Constructive criticism is welcomed though. This is roughly based off of Alice in Wonderland, but not much. It will have it's own plot and the Beyblade Characters. It's just the idea of a girl falling down a rabbit-hole into a place called Wonderland that I got from it. That's why I didn't classify it as a crossover. Sorry it's so short, but I promise next chapter will be longer. But for now, please read and review.
Disclaimer-I don't own Metal Fight Beyblade or Alice in Wonderland.
It was a lovely spring morning, the birds were chirping, the flowers were in bloom, and fourteen year old Madoka Amano's father hasn't blown himself up yet. Yes, it was a lovely spring morning indeed. Right now, Madoka was setting the table for her and her father's breakfast. Madoka's mother walked out on them when Madoka was four, so it's just been her and her father for as long as she could remember. Madoka did love her father, but he was a little off. He was an inventor, but unfortunately he wasn't good. And by that I mean most of his inventions ended up blowing up. And after a few too many noise complaints from their neighbors, they ended up moving from the busy city to the isolated forest.
Although Madoka did miss her friends, she was rather fond the forest that she lived in. She loved to wander around and explore the area. She found out a lot of new things about where she lived, like there was a nearby field of flowers, or that there was a small creek about a mile away, and that there was a huge hollowed out oak tree nearby that had a whole big enough she could fit inside of it and could stand up inside the tree without a problem.
BOOM! Madoka quickly ran into the basement, to make sure her father didn't hurt himself, only to find that today he wasn't working on building an invention, but instead was creating blueprints for it.
"What was that sound I heard then?" Madoka asked. Her father put a hand on her head and ruffled her short maroon hair, a characteristic that she had inherited from him, along with her sky blue eyes.
"My guess is that there's a storm coming," he told his daughter.
"But it was so nice out just a little bit ago."
"That's usually the signal that there's a really bad storm's coming." Madoka sighed, so much for a beautiful day. "Oh. And Madoka?"
"Yeah?"
"Will you close the garage door before it rains, I really want to finish these blueprints and create my invention!" Madoka sighed.
"Okay." Madoka sadly exited the basement. She honestly loved her father, but she wished that he spent a little bit more time with her than with his inventions. When Madoka got upstairs, she noticed the sky was no longer clear and sunny, but dark and cloudy instead. Madoka quickly went outside, afraid that if she took too long out there, she'd be caught in the rain, and closed the garage door. As she was walking back inside, she saw something moving out of the corner of her eye. Madoka stopped and looked to where she was movement. Although she could only catch a glimpse of what it was, she was fairly sure she saw a boy… with white hair? Then again, she had maroon hair, so she really shouldn't judge.
"Hey!" Madoka called out, hoping he heard her. "It's going to rain! Do you want to come inside?!" She hesitated for a moment, and then ran after him.
Madoka chased after him quite a ways, but finally stopped when she realized she didn't know where she was anymore. And by the look of the clouds, it was going to rain any minute now.
Madoka sighed. How was she going to find her way back? But since she knew it'd be a good idea to try to escape the rain when it came, she looked around for shelter from the rain. But she decided a tad too late, as right after she thought that it started to downpour. She quickly ran underneath a tree, but quickly fled when she heard lightning strike nearby. She was running away, looking for a better spot to escape the rain, when she saw a flash of white. It was the boy! Madoka quickly ran to where she saw him, but she was shocked when she saw him jump into a large rabbit-hole in the ground. Madoka slowly walked over to the hole, completely ignoring the rain now. She leaned over and looked inside. It was deep, too deep to see the bottom.
"Hello?" Madoka called down there. "Are you okay?! Do you want me to go get help?!" Madoka swiftly turned around, hoping to find her way out of the forest to help the boy, when she slipped on the mud and fell into the hole.
"Ahhhh!" Madoka screamed as she fell. Little did she know that she was going to take a trip that would change her life forever.
Sooo, what'd you think? Should I continue or no? Any idea's for what character should be what (AKA Tsubasa as the White Rabbit)? I'll try to update tomorrow, if not Monday.
