Well...here it is! A brand-new version of my original story, Searing the Skies. Needless to say, I was never very happy with how the original sounded. It was obvious from the very beginning that the prophesy would involve my OC Sora, but this way the reader will have a harder time figuring out what is to come. I purposely wrote the prologue without any description (in case you all were wondering). Anyway, I hope you like this version much better than the other one, because I'm not bringing the old one back.
Oh: I've also decided that any information coming in from behind the scenes will be written like this.
Chiron and Nico (c) Rick Riordan
"Ah, Nico. Nice to see you outside camp."
"Huh? Chiron? What are you doing here? Who's watching camp?"
"The senior campers are handling the new arrivals, and Mr. D is taking care of the more important matters while I am away."
"I bet."
Chuckle. "As to what I am doing here, I felt a rather powerful presence in New York, and decided to investigate."
"I felt it too. But I just assumed it was one of the gods or something."
"I don't think so. It is better to investigate and be thorough than make assumptions without further knowledge."
"Hm...I just met this girl, do you think...?"
"Nico, as hard as it may be for you, I must ask you to leave this to me."
"But-"
"You are still very young. This sort of thing must be left to those who know how to handle the situation without drawing attention to it."
"Alright. Fine."
"Nico, wait-!"
SLAM!