Author's note; hi everyone. This is the story that I've been working on for a while now and thought I would post it here since it got such a good response at the other place I posted it.
This prologue is very short only 320 words so I am going to post the second chapter and then it will be one chapter a month. I hope to hear feedback from the readers I love hearing your thoughts on my writing. Hope you enjoy.
Chapter 1: A bad carriage ride.
Brown eyes slowly open, the person vaguely wondered why the ground was shaking, as they blinked their eyes, they slowly realize that the reason the ground was moving was because they were in a carriage.
Trying to set up their hands, or more precisely what was wrapped around their hands caught on a nail that was sticking out in they collided with the carriage floor.
That's when the figure realized that their hands were bound behind their back with rope, they tried to move to see if they could loosen their bonds but soon enough slumped against the hard wood of the carriage when they realized that it wasn't going to happen. Blowing a piece of black hair that had fallen in front of their face they huff and tried to sit up.
"Take it easy your highness."
The raven jumped and tried to twist their body like a contortionist to see who was speaking, only to fail and smack their head on the floor, eliciting a moan.
Lying there dazed from the two collisions with the wood floor the person took a moment to try and distinguish if they recognized the voice.
"Cecil?" the unknown Raven question.
"Yes my prince." the other figure now known as Cecil stated.
"What's going on?" he could hear Cecil shifting somewhere behind him.
"Well... 'You' got captured while trying to save some of the village children, so I in my awesomeness thought 'I' should try and rescue you."
The Raven now identified as a Prince rolled his eyes and stated; "so Lou Ellen said she would kick your ass if you let your princes's fiancé get captured alone." he snorted.
A paused,
"Cecil?"
"Yes me lord?"
Another paused,
"What are we going to do now?"
"I do not have a clue me lord."
The 2 figures road the rest of the way to their destination in silence.
