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Chapter 1
Allow me to introduce our "hero",He is named tatsuki. He doesn't know his last name. Or his parents. Or where He came from He knows is that he was found in the woods as a baby by his master. He was an interesting man named orochimaru. He raised tatsuki we'll as far as He is concerned. He taught him how to control his chakra and how to perform also taught him a bit of tijutsu!but he disappeared when tatsuki was eight. He has grown up in a village called suna since day ago tatsuki became a genin after two brings us now to tatsuki walking happily down the road. Tatsuki is rather tall for an eight year old and is wearing a mesh shirt,purple baggy pants,a long green coat with a purple stripe down the back,and blue ninja sandals. Also despite him being happy you wouldn't know it by looking at him. Currently tatsuki looks less like a happy kid who just passed the academy and more like a kid studying for a huge test in the academy. Tatsuki is reading a large book as he strolls down the street and if one were to look at the book they would see that it is a human anatomy a habit of his masters that rubbed off on him was studying things. Currently learning all the weaknesses of the human body was what interested tatsuki. As tatsuki strolled along nobody bothers him. He was the odd one out and he didn't understand or care why. It gave him his own space. Something his master didn't give him often. Thinking of his master/father figure was something he did often and it took all focus in his mind. That is until the heavy book he was reading was slammed into his unprepared face. Not only did this bring tatsuki back to reality but it stopped him in his tracks. The culprit was a genin who graduated with tatsuki yesterday. The genin was named koazu. He is a chubby kid with spiky brown hair and he is rather short aswell. "Ha you loser! It's a bit late to study freak,the academy days are over! Speaking of,I graduated first try while you barely pa-" koazu didn't get to finish his mocking as tatsuki struck a pressure point with just enough force to make him lose controll of all bodily functions before kneeing him in the stomach and watching him drop to the floor. As koazu looked up at tatsuki and tried not to soil himself any further tatsuki brushed his book off and looked at his fallen tormenter. "If I had hit you a bit to the right with a bit more force I could have punctured your lung and left you to die. Be happy you only got the literal shit kicked out of you. Now run home and change your pants before I decide to use you for some experiments involving more pressure points." With that koazu ran away crying like a baby as tatsuki smirked and let his hair shadow his eyes before walking away. Tomarrow teams would be assigned and tatsuki couldn't wait "I wounder if any of my teammates would help me with a scientific experiment?" After he spoke those words all of the genin,civilians,and low level jonin shiver as somewhere in the land of fire a snake like man feels a sudden surge of pride. "Only time will tell I guess" tatsuki then headed home to finish his book and get rest so that he wouldn't be late for team assignments tomarow.
So what did you guys think? I really like the ideas I have so far and if you like them to give me a comment for more or perhaps some constructive criticism?