Disclaimer : As much as I love Inuyasha I don't own him ... For now any ways ( Evil Laugh goes here) lol really I don't own the guy or characters.
Kagome sat at the edge of her bed. Her breaths were short and she was shaking miserably. Her hands clutched her newly formed wounds on her stomach and back.
" K-Kagome are you okay ?", Saota asked from the corner of her room. Saota was never beaten like Kagome. It had been happening more know than ever. Their mother Kiori, married Naraku two years ago. In the beginning every thing was fine they were a happy family, but after Kiori past away Naraku started to act differently.
First he was only yelling and drinking all the time, but recently hr started hitting on Kagome. The poor boy didn't know whether to go and console his sister or just leave her be. He wanted to kill Naraku for what he had done, but he knew that he was to weak and if he tried to fight, it would only end in more beatings for his beloved sister.
Her raven hair clung to her tear stained face. Her mind was blank her brother' s calling out to her was muffled by her loud sobbing. Her body felt as if She had been numb and her once beautiful skin was now filled with blue, black, and purple bruises. Why had he changed so suddenly, it wasn't always like this, those words replayed in her mind over and over again.
Ok I know this chappy is short but I really need to know what you guys think before i can write any further. The last story I was writing must have sucked because unless I start to get better or any reviews i'm not writing any more to It. THE SAME GOES FOR THIS STORY... NO REVIEWS AND I WONT KEEP WRITING!!
Any way tell me what you think
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