Okay im writing this story for English so I decided to see what you guys think of it so far. Yes I know its short but I have a little problem with writing long stuff ya know. Well enjoy

Disclaimer I don't own Kingdom Hearts or Narnia

Kingdom of Narnia

Chapter 1 introductions

Demyx, Roxas, Axel & Namine all lived in an orphanage. Axel was the oldest being 17years old, he had fiery red hair, emerald greens eyes and he loved playing with fire which got him into trouble a lot. The second eldest was Demyx. Demyx was 15yr's of age, he had sandy-blonde hair that was always styled to a Mullet mixed with a Mohawk, He had blue eyes and played an instrument called a Sitar. Next was Roxas he was at the age of 14, he had blonde spiked up hair and deep blue eyes. Namine was the only girl of the four and being 11 she was also the youngest. Namine had very light blonde hair and pale-blue eyes.

One day an elderly couple came to the orphanage looking to adopt and took interest in the four so within an hour the couple filled out the paper work, informed the children to pack there bags and they were on their way, to their new home.

"Oi Dem!" called Axel "I told you not to call me that Axel!" Replied Demyx "sorry" "its fine" Demyx said through his teeth "What do you want" said Demyx as Axel turned to him "what's the bet someone died here"

Axel said with a smirk on his face "s-someone d-d-died here!" asked Demyx getting scared "probably" shrugged axel which made Demyx gulp "yeah this place is probably full of ghosts" just as Axel said that Namine walked in "g-ghosts" exclaimed a weak voice axel turned around to see Namine in the door way frozen and shaking "Yep! Where living in a house full of ghosts!"

Roxas walks in "y-you really think so?" "Bull crap!" replied a voice from the door way making them all jump including axel "ah! Lil-buddy nice of you to join us" said the red-haired male "I was just telling dear Nami about the ghosts here" axel had a childish smirk dancing across his face "don't be stupid!" said Roxas "Ghosts don't exist!"

Cliff-hanger! Lawl if you want me to keep writing this review and if you would like to give me some tips on stuff that would be great too!

NCM out! =P