Ok guys my second story first one was bad so I just want to say constructive criticism would be helpful
DESCLAIMER: I do not own naruto if I did I would not be writing this fanfic
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Date: October 10 : 5 years after the kyuubi attack
In the village of Konohagakure we could see a 5 year old boy with blond hair and blue eyes named Naruto uzumaki running from a mob of villagers and a few ninja , the boy was about to get away when he felt a pain spike through his left leg. One of the ninja threw a Kunai at his chest but ended up hitting his leg instead. The mob caught up to him because the Kunai wound was keeping him from running . The villagers started to beat him like they did every year but this one was the worst Naruto ever felt, after a hour of beatings Naruto fell unconscious after feeling a few broken ribs and a fractured skull .
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In a room in konoha's hospital the third hokage was sitting in a chair next to naruto . The boy had 3 broken ribs 1 fractured arm 2 leg wounds and a fractured skull , saying the hokage was mad was like saying Jiraiya was not a pervert , he was furious he sent out a team of anbu one hour early and they as they said "got lost on the way there". He was about to leave when naruto started to wake up.
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Naruto groaned as he woke up his head was killing him , he opened his eyes to see the hokage sitting there "what's up oji-San " naruto said as he sat up . "Naruto how do you feel " the old sarutobi asked "not good it feels like have been slammed into a mountain " naruto replied
"We'll thanks to your healing rate you should be healed in a few hours come to my office when you get out " the hokage sayed the shunshined away to do paperwork
( "I know the feeling sarutobi stupid paperwork " "NOOOO I BROKE THE FORTH WALL OH THE PAPERWORK")
AN: sorry for the short chapter I'll make another soon and don't worry in the second or third chapter he will get the bloodline , see you guys next chapter
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