Noir-BLUE:
First MA Fic, sorry for errors. And I recommend asking bleedman to do the new comic book.
"Thou cannot hurt thee, thee's body is the body of thou's beloved" 'Elena' said in a robotic voice wearing a purple jumpsuit with blue lines, having her hair down.
"Don't you use Elena's body, you cowardly monsters" I shouted holding my bleeding right arm. Me and the others tried to save her but failed, MISERABLY. Now everyone's injured, bleeding or unconscious.
How did this Happen?
It all started in a bright morning. Me and Elena were at the park playing.
"That's not fair Zick, you know you're taller than me" Elena said and pouted. Playing pick-a-apple wasn't the best game to her.
"Elena, you're acting like a brat" I said walking to the bench where she was sitting.
"Yes, Thou is not fair" a voice in the wind said and suddenly a vampire-like creature appeared beside Elena. I used my voice Dom but didn't work as the creature leaned in and whispered to Elena then both of them disappeared.
My heart pounded and I ran to the armory to ask what my opponent was. But nobody knew what it was.
Three days later at the ancient armory, Elena appeared to everyone.
"Greetings, Horrible tamers" she said. WAIT. Why is my heart pounding and my face burning? Was it because of her clothes? A purple-blue jumpsuit! She wasn't wearing that when she disappeared.
"Elena, I'm glad you're safe" Mom said coming closer but when Elena glared at her, she took a step back.
"Thou's rank is inaudible to thy's, Pathetic Keeper" She said making mom furious. Who wouldn't be, she was the one who gave her the ability to see monsters and now she's back talking her.
"Elena, what's wrong with you?" I asked and when she glared at me, her eyes were different. They weren't the eyes of the Elena I know, they were full of rage and hatred along with disgust.
"Enough with the distractions, thy have come here to say 'Thy's race shall always win. Despair and suffering are the remnants of the torn disgusting race called tamers'" She said and then disappeared leaving blue petal roses burning in black fire.
"Was that really Elena?" Lay said looking at the place where Elena was as the burning petal roses fell. And when one came to me, the petal turned into white and the fire became light.
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