you migt notice i got better at spelling this time so it should be a good story...WELL LETS GET STARTING!!!

once upon a time (SPELLED IT RIGHT FUKHEADS) there was a us army soljer named petey mcflannigan.he was marine core 3rd brigade and a cornel.all his men lookd up to him becuas he was such a good leeder.

'captan petey wat are we gona do?!?!' 1st luteniant jimmy sayd as the bullets rained down on them.

'we weill flank right and cach them suprise!!' petey screemd above the fiting.

so they all five of them went to the right of them and shot them. there was a grenade and it blew up blowing jimmy in half.everyone screemed.

'NOOO JIMMY WHY DID YOU DIE' petey and his men screemed.

'im sorry cornel i tried but i lost' jimmy sayd as he die.everyone wanted to cry but they had no time to cry becaus the arestrick had been ordrd on them by the nazi scum.

every1 run for cover!!!!! petey screemed as he jumped under a tabel. seeing a hiding nazi under the table he stabbed the nazi in the face five times with his combat mashetti that he carried wit him at all time. the naizi fite back but he die anyway because nazis are pussys.lol

and so the trilling concosion as peteys scwad fites the evil nazis and they leader hitler.whowill win? find out next chapeter. AND REVEW!