Title : I don't know at present
Base : GW
Genre : Angst
Auteur : Me
Date : from Friday 13rd / Jan / 2006 to ... / ... / 2006
This is my first atemp in English. I hope you'll be gentless with me, because my English isn't perfect – even, far from that ! So, I would you give me your reactions... Please...? chibi eyes of the death who kill Onegaï gozaimasu ! Well, I'm coming back to written
Good lecture !
BECAUSE... YOU'RE
Prologue
He was terrified. Out of breath, he tried hard to speed up his pace already swift. He didn't know who was following him for about 15 minutes. All he knew was that he was really afraid.
I hope he -she?- isn't reinforced… Otherwise, I'm truly in a mess...
That wasn't the first time he was being followed. The teenager felt confused that somebody would … he didn't know that, in fact… but he foresaw that isn't good for him. And even… not good at all. He accélerated ; he didin't want to this too much strange person recapture him.
And one again, he was afraid.
Like never before.
Generally, he wasn't a fearful person. It was just the opposite. But in this time... It was completely different.
It had begun with a... kind of shade... Like a presence which he felt like a whale killer in an inflatable swimming-pool.
And now... A mysterious person was following him since many streets, although he had already turned right or left an incalculable number of times.
It was him that this shade would, not an other.
Just... him.
Hell !
The young man turned into a dark alley, and ran. The end of this alley was more obsucre than the entrance. He didn't want to look back. He was too afraid of what he could see.
Back him, he felt that, the shade wasn't left behind.
Why me ? And why, quite simply !
He began to get out of breath ; he was not used to run so quickly. But it's well-known, fear gives wings. So, he continued to run. Suddenly he realized that this alley was a dead end.
Oh Gosh ! I'm very... Hell !
He turned round to see the person who had been following him up to now. He stared at it. Long honey-colored hairs adorned light gilt/tanned knotted on a thickpigtail (battant) two tights and a black tight-fitting leather trousers ; a dark cloak to a cowl which let to perceive only two shiny beams of a dangerous and intense faint light... mauve...?
The joung boy turned pale when a moon-reflection ran through the huge strip of a superb scythe.
He knew immediatly who it was.
It's... Death...?
And there is the first chapter of my first English fic ! Please say me what you are thinking about it.
And please, excuse my mystakes. I make efforts to improve my grammar... but it's not perfect. Please, let me a review !
Thanks
Shin 1x2
Big kisses for all