Rise of Darkrai a pokeshipping story

by FunFX2012

in a different dimension, two deities are locked in vicious combat, as ash and friends reach Alamos town they run into new Pokemon... and old friends and a battle that could mean the end of our heroes and our very dimension. only ash and his friends along with the help of a mysterious darkrai can thwart this danger and save the day. an AAML and remake of the movie rise of darkrai

1. prologue: Godey's diary

Rise of Darkrai: a pokèshipping story

(Authors note: this is my first fan fiction and I am not a very experienced writer but I always try my best, this is a remake of the "Rise of Darkrai" movie showing what would happen if Misty had returned. An AAML please review)

Prologue: Godey's diary

Alamos town, the Sinnoh region.

A man named Tonio is reading through a diary owned by a man named Godey from a century ago, it reads this:

"Two entities that never should have met, cross paths in the space-time rift. This ill-fated meeting has brought forth their unbridled wrath enveloping the city, and as a result: all has collapsed. what could be the true meaning of this nightmare?"

"Wow, Godey's diary" Tonio says thinking about the diary entry

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Meanwhile in an alternate dimension unbeknownst to the rest of the world, two Pokémon filled with rage confronted eachother.

A large, pink and white bipedal creature with small wings known as Palkia, the Pokémon that governs space.

Another large creature, a blue and grey four-legged beast with an elongated skull and gears on its back known as Dialga, the Pokémon that governs time.

They both start charging their signature moves.

Palkia's pink gems on its shoulders shined brightly and its eyes glowed orange, Dialga's blue gem on its chest shined a bright blue, the gears on its back expanded and its eyes glowed orange, they both fired their attacks.

Palkia threw it's arm forward creating a pink attack that looks like an air slash and Dialga breathed with a roar a multi coloured blast that looks like a hyper beam.

The attacks collided creating a massive explosion that caused dimensional shockwaves and scattered the Unown that roam the dimension the Pokémon are fighting in.

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Back in Alamos town the shockwaves affected the town by causing things to start shaking and the hour-glass on Tonio's desk to fall and break.

Thus begins my fanfic, and yes I know this is pretty much a written version of the prologue of the movie but there is not much else I can add, please review and use constructive criticism bye for now!

(update, 25/11/14: I am updating and fixing old errors in my older chapters, I am not dead and I am having trouble writing the latest chapter 'Alamos town Pokémon contest'. If anyone can help me with the chapter that would be appreciated).